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Band 7+: The chart below shows the percentage of energy produced from renewable sources in five different countries in 2020. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the main features of the data and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image contains a bar chart titled "Energy produced from renewable sources (%)" for the year 2020. The vertical axis, labeled "percentage," ranges from 0 to over 40. The horizontal axis, labeled "country," shows data for five countries: Germany at approximately 31%, Australia at approximately 27%, China at approximately 11%, India at approximately 8%, and Brazil at approximately 41%.

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The chart illustrates the energy produced from only renewable sources in five different countries all over the world in 2020, in particular Brazil, China, India, Australia and Germany. This value is expressed by percentage, and the range is between 0% till a maximum of 40%.

Overall, it can be seen that Brazil produced the highest value of green energy, while Germany and Australia have a similar percentage and at the end China and India share two of the lowest data.

Brazil shows a percentage near 40%, which represents the highest value of the chart. On the other hand, Germany and Australia have lower percentages compared to Brazil, and have roughly the same data, in particular, a value around 30% for the first and a percentage between 25% and 30% for the second. Eventually, China and India show the lowest data,in detail the first is about 10% and the second has a value below 10%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

value: 5

percentage: 4

brazil: 3

china: 3

india: 3

australia: 3

germany: 3

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main features of the bar chart, providing a clear overview of the percentage of energy produced from renewable sources in the five countries. The comparison between countries is well-executed, and the overall structure is logical. To further enhance the report, consider including more precise data values instead of approximations (e.g., 'approximately 31%' could be stated more accurately). Also, ensure consistent language throughout (e.g., using 'approximately' or precise values consistently). While the report meets the requirements of the task, refining the accuracy and consistency of the data presentation could elevate it further.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. Transitions between sentences and ideas are present but could be smoother to enhance the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to connect ideas more effectively. For example, in the last paragraph, you could use 'Specifically' instead of 'in detail' to introduce the percentages for China and India.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary suitable for the task. However, there's room to enhance the lexical resource by using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'percentage' and 'value,' try synonyms like 'proportion,' 'figure,' or 'rate.' Also, consider using more descriptive adjectives and adverbs to add depth to your descriptions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar with generally accurate sentence structures and punctuation. While there are only a few minor errors, refining sentence construction and ensuring consistent subject-verb agreement can further improve grammatical accuracy. For example, in the sentence 'Brazil shows a percentage near 40%, which represents the highest value of the chart,' consider rephrasing it for better clarity and conciseness.

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