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Band 4+: The chart below shows the percentage of fuel from renewable energy used in the transport sector in six European Union (EU) countries in 2009 and 2010, compared to the average. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents data on the percentage of fuel from renewable energy used in the transport sector for the years 2009 and 2010 across seven categories: Slovakia 2009 at 9%, 2010 at 8%; Austria 2009 at 6%, 2010 at 7%; France 2009 at 6%, 2010 at 7%; Poland 2009 at 5%, 2010 at 6%; Spain 2009 at 4%, 2010 at 6%; Greece 2009 at 1%, 2010 at 2%; EU average 2009 at 4%, 2010 at 5%.

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The imagene illustrates the number of fuel from renewable energy which need in the transport sector between 2009 and 2010.

Overall, thre are six countries which the highest percent shows Slovakia and the lowest was Greece.

In 2009 the number of renewable energy used 9,5% in Slowakia and Australia consert 6,5 %of fuel. But in 2010 b0th 0f them declined to 1,5-1,0 %. in France the numbers of energy was the same (6,0%) in 2009-2010. The usage of renewable energy in Poland was 5% in 2009 and after one year it is increased to 6%. The same situation was in Spain, but it is increased from 3,5 % to 4,9 % in both years.The last European country is Greece which used only 1,1 % in 2009 renewable energy in the transport sector, but it is jumped to 2% in 2010. The everage using the renewable energy in the transport sector was 4,1% in 2009 and increased to 4,9% in next year.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

energy: 6

renewable: 5

which: 3

transport: 3

sector: 3

increased: 3

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The report generally addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies in the data reported and some issues with clarity. To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and proofread carefully for errors in grammar and expression.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overview and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disorganized manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. To improve coherence, start with a concise overview paragraph summarizing the main trends. Then, organize the body paragraphs around specific aspects of the data, such as comparing the highest and lowest percentages, or grouping countries with similar trends. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly', 'in contrast', 'however') to link ideas and sentences.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is a limited range of vocabulary, and some word choices are not entirely appropriate (e.g., 'imagene', 'consert', 'everage'). To enhance lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to trends, comparisons, and data description. For example, instead of 'the number of energy was the same,' you could say 'the percentage of energy remained constant.' Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

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