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Band 5+: The chart below shows the percentage of households in different income groups that owned various consumer goods in 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains a table with percentage data for three income groups and a 'Car (%)' category, across three device columns: Television (%), Computer (%), and Smartphone (%). For the low income group, the values are Television 70%, Computer 25%, and Smartphone 25%. For the middle income group, the values are Television 95%, Computer 70%, and Smartphone 70%. For the high income group, the values are Television 99%, Computer 95%, and Smartphone 95%. For the 'Car (%)' row, the values are Television 99%, Computer 95%, and Smartphone 90%.

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The table provides a precentage of household in different income groups that owned various consumer goods in 2020. As we analyzing the three incomes that already been showed. According to the data, we can conclude that Television has the biggest percentage among them all.

Overall, it shows that low income family owned a Television rather than individual electronic devices, such as Smartphone or Computer. However, the middle income family did not has the same opinion about it, they tend to use television the most but owned a computer or smartphone equally.

In contrast, the higher income people owned the three of the electronic items with a close amount to eachother. Althought they still used television the most of it. Thus, the other are not their main problems. Higher income family tend to have it all due to their wealthiness.

In addition, most of them owned television the most rather than any small devices. Television are essentials for them to have as we can see at the percentage itself.

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The report identifies some general trends but lacks specific data references to support the observations. The organization is somewhat unclear, and the analysis could be more focused on comparing and contrasting the data across income groups and consumer goods. To improve, include specific percentages to back up claims and organize the information more logically, perhaps by discussing each consumer good separately and comparing ownership across income groups.

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The report lacks clear paragraphing and transitions, making it difficult to follow the main points. The introduction is weak and doesn't effectively set the stage for the analysis. The organization of ideas could be improved by grouping similar observations together and using more cohesive devices to link sentences and paragraphs. For example, use transition words like 'similarly,' 'however,' 'furthermore,' and 'in conclusion' to guide the reader through the information. Each paragraph should focus on a specific aspect of the data, such as comparing ownership rates across income groups or highlighting trends for specific consumer goods.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There is a reliance on simple words and phrases, which limits the depth of the analysis. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to consumer goods, income levels, and statistical trends. For example, instead of saying 'biggest percentage,' you could use 'highest proportion' or 'largest share.' Instead of 'tend to use,' consider 'are more likely to use' or 'demonstrate a preference for.' Expanding your vocabulary will allow you to express your ideas more accurately and effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors detract from the clarity and credibility of the writing. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Pay attention to verb tenses (past, present, future) and ensure that verbs agree with their subjects. Also, vary your sentence structures to make your writing more engaging and sophisticated. Proofread carefully to catch and correct errors before submitting your work.

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