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Band 5+: The chart below shows the results of a European survey into young people's expectations for change in five different areas of life in the next 20 years. They were asked if they thought things would improve or get worse. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart depicting European survey results on young people's expectations for change in five life areas over 20 years, detailing improvement and deterioration percentages: communication between people shows 54% expecting improvement and 46% deterioration; quality of food indicates 49% improvement, 51% deterioration; quality of water has 40% expecting improvement, 60% deterioration; quality of air in cities reveals 23% expecting improvement and 77% deterioration; health shows 42% improvement and 58% deterioration.

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he bar chart compares youngster’s expectations for change in terms of 5 various kind of factors with probability for improvement or worsening in their life in the upcoming 2 decade. Unites are measured in percentages.

Overall, it is clear that among young people the proportion of the negative effects of life might be predominant particularly, the quality of the air which will become the main negative effect for them whereas the development of expectations might be lower than worsening.

When it comes to the percentages of air quality, it might become detrimental impact on youngsters which accounts for 70% which followed by quality of water at 60% and the health at 58% while the impact of communication and food trailing behind at 46% and 51% respectively.

In terms of positive expectations among youngsters, communication among people become ranked the highest the proportion of food and health following behind at 49% and 42%. However, the percentages of air quality is the lowest which makes up 23%.

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which: 4

expectations: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and identifies the key trends, such as the general pessimism regarding certain areas like air quality. However, there are some inaccuracies in how the data is presented and described. For instance, the overview contains some confusing phrasing regarding 'development of expectations,' and the body paragraphs occasionally conflate the categories. To improve, ensure that comparisons are more precise and that the distinction between 'improvement' and 'deterioration' is consistently clear throughout the report. Aim for more precise vocabulary when describing trends and proportions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and punctuation errors. For instance, the overview contains a run-on sentence structure that makes the main trend difficult to follow. To improve, focus on using clearer transition signals and ensuring that each sentence has a single, clear purpose. Avoid overly complex sentence structures if they compromise the clarity of your message.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'predominant', 'detrimental', 'trailing behind'), but many word choices are inaccurate or unnatural in an academic context. For example, 'youngster's expectations' is slightly informal, and phrases like '5 various kind of factors' or 'the development of expectations might be lower than worsening' are imprecise. Aim to use more standard academic collocations, such as 'expectations of improvement' or 'projections for change,' and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used in their correct forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that impact readability. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the percentages... is'), incorrect article usage, and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'it might become detrimental impact'). There are also issues with sentence construction, such as 'which accounts for 70% which followed by'. To improve, practice using relative clauses correctly and ensure that your sentence structures are grammatically complete. Pay close attention to the relationship between subjects and verbs to ensure accuracy.

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