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Band 6+: The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a pie chart detailing the global energy consumption distribution for 2010, with petroleum accounting for 39%, natural gas at 23%, coal representing 22%, nuclear electric power comprising 9%, and renewable sources making up 7%.

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The presented pie chart depicts various energy consuption on the earth in 2010.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the most of the inhabitants prefer to use Petroleum and Natural gas. In strak contrast, the least popular option for people was Renewable energy.

In particular, fossil fuels (oil, gas, and coal) formed the foundation of the global energy sector constituting with overall 84%. Petrolrum, which is also oil, accounted the largest proportion, making up for a straggering 39%. Following this, goes Natural gas which was approximately a quarter of the total. A simillar pattern was observed in Coal with the % standing at 22.

At the opposite end of the spectrum stood nuclear and renewable energy, leaving themselves as the least viable alternative at 15% in total. For instance, Nuclear electric power and Renewable energy represented 9% and 7%, respectively. Furthermore, they roughly stood at the same level, albeit with a slight variance in 2%.

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renewable: 3

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The report covers the main features of the chart, including overall trends and specific data points. It makes comparisons between categories and highlights the dominance of fossil fuels. However, there are some inaccuracies (e.g., 'straggering' instead of 'staggering', 'Petrolrum' instead of 'Petroleum') and minor omissions (e.g., not explicitly stating that the data is for 2010). The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise. Overall, the response adequately addresses the task with some lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, there are some lapses in cohesion, such as unclear referencing ('the most of the inhabitants') and awkward phrasing ('Following this, goes Natural gas'). The use of cohesive devices is somewhat mechanical at times. To improve, ensure that each paragraph flows smoothly and that transitions between ideas are natural. Consider using a wider range of linking words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but contains some errors and inappropriate choices, e.g., 'consuption' (consumption), 'strak' (stark), 'straggering' (staggering), 'simillar' (similar). There is an attempt to use a range of expressions ('readily apparent', 'at the opposite end of the spectrum'), but some are not used accurately. To improve, focus on spelling and word form accuracy, and ensure that less common vocabulary is used correctly and naturally.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement ('the most of the inhabitants prefer'), incorrect verb forms ('accounted the largest proportion' should be 'accounted for'), and punctuation issues. Some sentences are awkwardly constructed. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence structures with greater accuracy, and pay attention to common grammatical patterns, especially prepositions and articles.

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