Band 4+: The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the pie chart and making some comparisons. However, there are some areas for improvement. The report could benefit from more specific comparisons and a more nuanced analysis of the data. For example, you could group similar energy sources together or discuss the relative proportions more thoroughly. Also, ensure accuracy in reporting the data; there's a discrepancy in the percentage reported for coal. Overall, the report is well-organized and presents a clear overview of the information, but it could be enhanced with more detailed analysis and precise data reporting. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the flow is disrupted by awkward phrasing and a lack of clear transitions. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related ideas. To improve coherence, focus on using cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link sentences and paragraphs smoothly. Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and that the information is presented in a logical order.

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, which limits the report's ability to convey information precisely. There is a reliance on simple words and phrases (e.g., 'biggest percentage,' 'lowest percentage,' 'held by'). To enhance lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to energy consumption and data analysis. Use synonyms and more specific terms to describe the quantities and relationships presented in the chart.

The report contains several grammatical errors that impede understanding. Issues include incorrect verb tense, subject-verb agreement problems, and awkward sentence structures. There are also errors in punctuation and word choice. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on mastering basic grammatical structures and sentence patterns. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling. Consider using a grammar checker or seeking feedback from a language tutor to identify and address recurring errors.