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Band 6+: The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates three offenses between 1970 and 2005, car theft rose from 0.4m in 1970 peaking at 1.6m in 1995 then slightly fell to 1.2m in 2005, house burging increased from 0.2m to 0.6m in 1980 then declined to 0.3m in 2005, and street robbery maintained around 0.2m throughout the period but slightly increased to 0.5m over time.

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The line chart illustrates how many cases of car stealing, house burgling and street robbing in a certain city from 1970 to 2005.

Overall, car theft accounted for the highest number of incidents. In addition, all three occurrences witnessed an upward trend.

To begin with, 0.4 million cars were stolen in 1970 and the number increased significantly to 1 million in the next twenty years before reaching a peak at 1.6 million in 1995. After that, the figure decreased slightly to 1 million at the end of the period examined. Additionally, there were under 0.2 million street robbery affairs, followed by a slow rise by 0.3 million cases in 2005.

Turning to house burglary, the figure started at 0.2 million in 1970, after which it rocketed to hit the highest point at 0.9 million in 1980 before dropping to 0.6 million in 1985. Moreover, the amount of housebreaking events saw a reasonable growth and then declined minimally by 0.1 million in the twenty years period.

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides relevant data, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the final car theft number is misreported as 1 million instead of 1.2 million, and the peak for house burglary is misreported as 0.9 million instead of 0.6 million. The description of the house burglary trend is also not entirely accurate. To improve, ensure all data points are accurately represented and that descriptions of trends are precise.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The 'Overall' statement is somewhat inaccurate as not all three occurrences witnessed an upward trend throughout the entire period. The description of house burglary is a bit disjointed, jumping between different years without a clear narrative. Consider grouping information more logically, perhaps by offense type or by period, to enhance coherence. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary, but there are opportunities to use more precise and sophisticated language. For example, instead of 'increased significantly,' consider using 'rose sharply' or 'increased substantially.' The terms 'affairs' and 'amount of housebreaking events' are not the most appropriate choices; consider alternatives like 'incidents' or 'cases.' Vary your vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'plateaued,' 'fluctuated') for a more nuanced description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report generally demonstrates a reasonable command of grammar, but there are some errors and areas for improvement. For instance, the phrase 'car stealing,' 'house burgling' and 'street robbing' could be improved to 'car theft,' 'house burglary,' and 'street robbery'. Also, the description of the house burglary trend contains some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. Proofread carefully to eliminate grammatical errors and ensure clarity.

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