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Band 6+: The chart below shows three different crimes and the number of cases committed between 1970 and 2005 in England and Wales. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates three offenses between 1970 and 2005, car theft rose from 0.4m in 1970 peaking at 1.6m in 1995 then slightly fell to 1.2m in 2005, house burging increased from 0.2m to 0.6m in 1980 then declined to 0.3m in 2005, and street robbery maintained around 0.2m throughout the period but slightly increased to 0.5m over time.

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The line graph illustrates the data of incidents of car theft, house burglary, and street robbery in a particular city from 1970 to 2005.

Overall, the number of car theft incidents were more than other two in every year, except 1980 when house burgling incidents were the highest among others. Notably, street robbery consistently had the lowest rate throughout the period.

In the first four periods, street robbery rates fluctuated from 0.10 million to 0.15 between 1970 and 1985, before its rate increased sharply in the next period until it hit its peak at 0.40 million.

In terms of house burgling incidents, 0.20 million incidents occurred in 1970, after which its rate increased relatively to its peak at 0.90 in 1980. In addition, the number of incidents of house burgling decreased to 0.60 in the next period, before increasing slightly back to 0.70 and stabilized there from 1990 to 1995. In 2000, the figure for house burgling continued to decline to 0.50 at the end of the period.

Regarding car theft, the amount of incidents of car theft started at 0.40 million, after which it significantly increased to 1.60 in 1995, before decreasing gradually to 1.20 at the end of the period.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

incidents: 7

house: 5

theft: 4

burgling: 4

street: 3

robbery: 3

million: 3

before: 3

increased: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and provides some data points, but there are inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that house burgling peaked at 0.90 in 1980, but the visual description indicates 0.6m. Also, the description of street robbery fluctuations and stabilization of house burgling incidents from 1990 to 1995 are not supported by the visual description. To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and directly supported by the graph. Focus on the most significant trends and avoid getting bogged down in minor fluctuations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs for each crime type. However, there are some areas where coherence could be improved. For example, in the third paragraph, the phrase "In the first four periods" is vague and could be more specific. Also, the transitions between some sentences and paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a seamless reading experience.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to crime and trends. However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or sophisticated. For example, using synonyms for words like "increased" and "decreased" could add variety. Additionally, be mindful of using the correct terminology (e.g., "house burglary" vs. "house burgling"). Overall, the lexical resource is adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of grammatical structures, but there are some errors that affect clarity. For example, in the second paragraph, the phrase "more than other two" should be "more than the other two." Also, there are some inconsistencies in verb tense and subject-verb agreement. Pay close attention to these details to improve grammatical accuracy. While the report is generally understandable, addressing these errors would enhance its overall quality.

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