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Band 7+: The chart below shows various transport tourists used within New Zealand in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows data on transport use in New Zealand in 2004 by nationality: British took air 55, coach 30, car 35, ferry 5; Germans took air 30, coach 25, car 45, ferry 10; Japanese took air 60, coach 10, car 40, ferry 5; Koreans took air 45, coach 5, car 30, ferry 5; Australians took air 40, coach 10, car 55, and ferry 10.

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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of four different types of transport, namely air, coach, car and ferry, used by visitors from five countries (Britain, Germany, Japan, Korea and Australia) travelling to New Zealand in 2004.

Overall, coach was generally the most popular vehicle, whereas ferry accounted for the lowest proportion. Car travel was particularly common among Korean visitors, while air transport was a major contributor among Japanese tourists.

More precisely, British, German and Australian tourists preferences were largely similar to each other. The largest proportion was coach usage, which was higher than 50%. The second popular type of vehicle was air transportation, which constituted approximately 40% among British, 45% among German visitors and 25% among Australians. Car use was less common, whereas the least used was ferry.

In terms of Koreans and Japanese, visitors from Korea travelled mostly by car and air, which made up 45% and 42% respectively. Meanwhile, Japanese people preferred air transport that accounted for the highest proportion (55%), closely followed by coach (47%). The least preferred type of vehicle among both travelers was ferry, constituting nearly 8 percent.

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the main features of the bar chart, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is not entirely accurate, and some of the details in the body paragraphs are also not quite right. For example, it states that coach was generally the most popular vehicle, which is not supported by the data. Also, the percentages provided in the last paragraph are inaccurate. To improve, ensure that the overview accurately reflects the main trends and that all data cited is correct and supported by the visual information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and specific details. However, the organization could be improved by grouping countries with similar travel patterns more explicitly. For example, the report mentions similarities between British, German, and Australian tourists, but this could be emphasized further with a dedicated paragraph. Also, the transition between paragraphs could be smoother to enhance the flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary related to transport and proportions. Terms like 'proportion,' 'vehicle,' 'constituted,' and 'accounted for' are used appropriately. However, there's room to incorporate more varied and sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'the most popular,' consider alternatives like 'the predominant mode' or 'the favored means.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a strong command of grammar with accurate sentence structures and punctuation. The sentences are well-formed and convey the information clearly. While the grammar is largely error-free, attention to more complex sentence constructions could further elevate the writing. For example, using a wider variety of subordinate clauses or participial phrases could add sophistication.

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