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Band 4+: The chart below shows various transport tourists used within New Zealand in 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows data on transport use in New Zealand in 2004 by nationality: British took air 55, coach 30, car 35, ferry 5; Germans took air 30, coach 25, car 45, ferry 10; Japanese took air 60, coach 10, car 40, ferry 5; Koreans took air 45, coach 5, car 30, ferry 5; Australians took air 40, coach 10, car 55, and ferry 10.

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The graph below illustrates the types of transport used by tourists who visited New Zealand from five countries in 2004.

In general, in three countries the highest means of transport used was a coach, and in contrast this was a ferry, between 50 and 60 per cent. But, in Japanese the highest was an air transport and in Korea’s was a car.

In 2004, in Britain the most used transport was coach, which is about 58%, and next was air transport, approximately 42%. Then, two of transport, which means car and ferry were the lowest used, at 20% and 28%. As for the German, this was a coach as well, which is used more, at 54%. The air transport used percentage was similar with Britain in this country, at 43%. The car’s proportion was 35% and ferry was similar with 20%. Regarding to the Australia, the was coach, at 50%. And others utilized rate was the lowest, at under the 25%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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transport: 7

coach: 4

ferry: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and some misunderstandings of the data. The organization is not very clear, and the description of the data is not always accurate. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and organizing the information more logically, perhaps by comparing and contrasting the different nationalities' transport preferences.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The information is presented in a somewhat disorganized manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate ideas. Consider organizing the report by mode of transport or by country to improve coherence. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas within and between paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of precise language to describe the data. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'transport,' try to incorporate synonyms like 'mode of travel,' 'means of transportation,' or specific terms like 'air travel,' 'road transport,' etc. Expand your vocabulary to describe proportions and comparisons more accurately. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the information presented. Focus on improving your understanding and application of basic grammar rules. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors before submitting your work.

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