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Band 4+: The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing the percentage of female school-leavers entering higher education in five countries (the UK, the USA, Australia, South Korea, and France) in 1980 and 2015. In 1980, the UK had the highest percentage (30%), followed by the USA (20%), Australia (10%), South Korea (5%), and France (10%). In 2015, the UK still had the highest percentage (55%), followed by the USA (50%), Australia (40%), South Korea (10%), and France (25%).

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The chart supplied data about the ratio of female going into higher education in five major countries UK, USA, Australia, South Korea and France from the year 1980 to 2015.

As a general trend, Australia faced significant trend more than other countries in both years while South Korea proportion rate faced downward trend.

To commence with, in 1980 ladies school leavers and entered into university education showed constant fluctuations in every country. Moreover, in 2015 every country had increased trend except South Korea. Meanwhile, in 1980 Uk percentage was approximately 35% while in 2015 with the major rise it was reached 55%. On the other hand, in 2015 Uk and France women secured admission ratio was almost same 55%.

In the comparison, Australian women education ratio demonstrates constant proportion approximately 58% that was the highest trend compare with other countries. However, South Korea faced massive drop in 1980 percentage was almost 15% with the major rise reach at 30%.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several inaccuracies and omissions. It misinterprets the data for Australia and South Korea, and incorrectly states that the UK and France had similar percentages in 2015. The overview is vague and not fully supported by the data. To improve, ensure that all key figures are accurately reported, provide a clear and correct summary of the main trends, and avoid making unsupported claims. Focus on comparing the countries accurately and highlighting the most significant changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear overall structure and logical progression. The introduction is somewhat repetitive and does not clearly present the main trend. The body paragraphs are not well-organised, and the comparison between countries and years is confusing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'To commence with', 'On the other hand', 'In the comparison'). Paragraphing is not skilfully managed, and the reader has to work to follow the message. To improve, use a clear overview paragraph, group data logically (e.g., by country or by year), and use a range of linking words accurately.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'ratio', 'trend', 'constant fluctuations', 'secured admission ratio'). There is little use of precise academic vocabulary or synonyms. Some phrases are unclear or unnatural (e.g., 'ladies school leavers and entered into university education'). To improve, use a wider range of accurate vocabulary related to data description (e.g., 'percentage', 'proportion', 'increase', 'decline', 'significant rise', 'moderate growth'), and avoid informal or vague terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that significantly impede understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, articles, prepositions, and word order (e.g., 'the ratio of female going', 'faced significant trend', 'proportion rate faced downward trend', 'with the major rise it was reached'). Punctuation is also inconsistent. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct grammar, and then gradually incorporate more complex structures. Proofreading for common errors is essential.

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