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Band 4+: The chart illustrates Internet usage among a country’s population given by age group in 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a line graph titled "Internet Use Among a country's Population by Age Group from 2010 to 2017" with the x-axis representing age groups (16-24, 25-34, 35-44, 45-54, 55-64, 65-74) and the y-axis representing percentage of total population (0 to 100%). Two lines represent data for 2010 and 2017. In 2010, the 16-24 age group had around 95% internet use, 25-34 had around 90%, 35-44 had around 85%, 45-54 had around 75%, 55-64 had around 65%, and 65-74 had around 45%. In 2017, the 16-24 age group had around 100% internet use, 25-34 had around 95%, 35-44 had around 92%, 45-54 had around 88%, 55-64 had around 82%, and 65-74 had around 72%.

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The chart depicts the percentage of internate usage by different age group in a country in 2010 and 2017.A cursory glance is necessary to realize that the percentage of internet usage is high enough among the 16-24 people and least among the people who are aged 65-74.

In 2010 the percentage of internet users among the 16-24 aged people was little bit below 100% which is highest in that period of time.Then the percentage is slowly fluctuated with the age of people.At the age of 45-54 the percentage was gone below 60 and which remains undergoing .And finally at the age of 65-74 the percentage was lowest ever which is approximately 8%.

in 2017 the percentage of internet users was highest among the people aged 16-24 which is almost 100% and the percentage was slowly decreasing with the number of older age until at the age of 35-44. Then there was a rapid declination in percentage of internet users with their age growing up.And finally the percentage was undergo 30% at the age of 65-74.

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percentage: 10

internet: 4

among: 4

people: 4

which: 4

16-24: 3

users: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and identifies the general trends, such as the correlation between age and internet usage. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some reported figures (e.g., 8% and 30% for the oldest age group) deviate significantly from the provided visual description, which can mislead the reader. Additionally, the description of trends is sometimes confusing; for example, stating that percentages 'fluctuated' or 'remains undergoing' lacks precision. To improve, focus on accurately extracting data points from the visual and using more precise mathematical vocabulary (e.g., 'gradual decline', 'significant drop', or 'remained steady') rather than vague phrasing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, following a chronological order, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor sentence structure. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some transitions between sentences feel abrupt. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of linking words (e.g., 'In contrast,' 'Furthermore,' 'Conversely') and ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic. Avoid starting sentences with 'And' or 'Then' too frequently; instead, use these to connect clauses within a single sentence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is quite basic and contains several errors that impede clarity. There are spelling mistakes (e.g., 'internate') and awkward word choices (e.g., 'rapid declination', 'percentage was undergo'). To improve, work on learning academic collocations and synonyms for common words. For example, instead of 'the percentage was gone below,' use 'the percentage dropped below.' Instead of 'declination,' use 'decline' or 'decrease.' Aim for more precise descriptive language when discussing trends. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impact the readability of the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and sentence construction (e.g., 'which remains undergoing'). Many sentences are fragmented or poorly formed. To improve, focus on mastering basic sentence structures (simple, compound, and complex) and ensure that verb tenses are used correctly when describing past data. Practicing the use of relative clauses and prepositional phrases will help in creating more sophisticated and accurate sentences.

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