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Band 4+: The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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The image shows a bar chart with two colored bars for each profession, representing the number of male and female workers. In advertising, males are at 25, and females are at 40; in teaching, there are 90 males and over 90 females; construction has 90 males and 10 females; therapists have 30 males and 50 females; journalism has 50 males and females; scientists have 60 males and 50 females, and law has 60 males and 40 females.

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The line graph shows, the amount of male and female choose their career profession, in the time period of 2007. The study stated on behalf of Britain. Overall, the data demonstrate how men and women have chosen their profession and they faces competition.

Choosing a career path for male and female is very important part of their life. For example, there may be some path which ambitious for male in career opportunities. As we can see, there are three professions named construction, scientist, and law outnumbered female executives with the difference of 80%, 20%, 10% respectively.

Career opportunity is a face of the person. In female, there are many times when the ratio gets incremented, the skill of providing education is seen better in women, which is why the data shows 80% of difference with the male. Moreover, the data illustrates how male and female ratio came to 1:1 in journalism, however, advertising and therapist showed 10% and 60% difference respectively.

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the data presented in the chart but lacks specific details and comparisons between male and female executives in different professions. The focus should be on summarizing the main features and making necessary comparisons as instructed in the task.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks coherence and cohesion as the ideas are not logically organized. There are some irrelevant points that do not directly relate to the data presented in the chart. Paragraphing is also not effectively managed, leading to a lack of clarity in the presentation of information.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The report lacks precision in vocabulary use and does not demonstrate full flexibility in lexical features. More sophisticated and accurate word choices could enhance the overall quality of the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of grammatical structures are attempted, there are several grammatical errors throughout the report. Punctuation and sentence structures need improvement for better clarity and accuracy. More attention to grammatical accuracy would elevate the quality of the writing.

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Band 4+: The chart illustrates the percentage of male and female executives in six different types of profession across the UK in 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

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