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Band 5+: The chart shows the end of year value for four major international money market indices in 2005, 2006, 2007, and 2008. [FTSE 100 = UK Market Index, Dow Jones = US Market Index, KOSPI = Korean Market Index, CAC 40 = French Market Index] Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart depicting end-of-year values for FTSE 100, Dow Jones, KOSPI, and CAC 40 indices over 2005-2008. In 2005: FTSE 100 approx. 5500, Dow Jones approx. 10600, KOSPI approx. 1350, CAC 40 approx. 4700. In 2006: FTSE 100 approx. 6100, Dow Jones approx. 12500, KOSPI approx. 1400, CAC 40 approx. 5400. In 2007: FTSE 100 approx. 6400, Dow Jones approx. 13200, KOSPI approx. 1900, CAC 40 approx. 5600. In 2008: FTSE 100 approx. 4400, Dow Jones approx. 8800, KOSPI approx. 1100, CAC 40 approx. 3300.

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The following chart illustrates the value for four main international money market in the end of the year. The infotmation provided from 2005 to 2008.

Overall, it can be seen that Dow Jones has the biggest valume for all given period, while the lowest price has Korean market index. The UK and French market index have almost the same value from 2005 to 2008

According to the bar chart, the price of Dow jones ( US Market Index ) increased to 13000 in 2007 and then declined approximetly to 8500 in 2008. The Korean market index rose for a minor in 2007, however, after that it decreased to 1000 and became the lowest for all given period. The same one can observe about the UK and French Market index. It climbed in 2007 and than decreased.

In conclusion, If compare Dow jones and other three market one can notice that the valume do not change significantly over the four years.

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market: 7

index: 5

jones: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions that affect clarity. For instance, the statement that KOSPI had the lowest value throughout the period is incorrect, as CAC 40 was lower in 2008. Additionally, the report lacks specific data for 2005 and 2006, and the conclusion is vague. To improve, ensure all key features are accurately reported, include specific figures where relevant, and provide a clearer summary of the overall trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references. The overview is somewhat vague and could be more precise. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate key trends. Use cohesive devices more accurately to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks range and precision. There are several spelling errors (e.g., 'valume', 'infotmation', 'approximetly', 'minor' instead of 'minor amount') and inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'price' for index value, 'valume' for value). To improve, use a wider range of topic-specific vocabulary and ensure correct spelling and word forms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are frequent grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement ('the price ... increased'), incorrect verb forms ('rose for a minor'), and missing articles. To improve, focus on sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and proofreading for punctuation and grammar.

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