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Band 4+: The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

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The image illustrates the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people across six countries. Canada reports 38 mobile phones and 62 landlines, the US reports 48 mobile phones and 68 landlines, Germany has 70 mobile phones and 60 landlines, Denmark shows 82 mobile phones and 90 landlines, the UK reports 85 mobile phones and 60 landlines, Sweden has 88 mobile phones and 68 landlines, and Italy displays 90 mobile phones and 40 landlines.

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The given bar graph delineates comparative information about the number of mobile phones and landlines used in 7 different countries – Canada , US , Germany , Denmark , UK , Sweden , Italy .

It is explicitly observed that Italy , Sweden had highest number of phones which was almost 90 . At second UK and Denmark came slightly more than 80 . It was followed by Germany then with approximately 70 . Canada had the lowest mobile use , only just over 30 .

It is apparently seen that Denmark had enormous landline which was roughly more than its mobile . At second US and Sweden came with roughly 70 . Where as Sweden had more smart phones than landline in its country . Canada had landline phones just below 70 which was significantly more than smartphones.

Germany and UK had nearly 60 but mobiles among Germans was more popular and in UK more people preferred mobiles than landlines . At lowest Italy had just over 40 compared to peak level of mobile in its region .

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

mobile: 4

phones: 4

sweden: 4

canada: 3

denmark: 3

italy: 3

which: 3

landline: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5.5

The report provides a good overview of the data, but it misses some key details and makes a few inaccuracies. The report should also be more concise and avoid repetition.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The report could be more cohesive with better use of linking words and phrases.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The report could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The report needs to be carefully proofread and edited for grammatical accuracy.

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