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Band 5+: THE CHARTS BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT DIFFERENT SMARTPHONE MODELS AND ELECTRONIC SERVICES USED IN THE USA AND EUROPEAN COUNTRIES. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT, PHONE MODELS IN USE.

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The image presents two pie charts and a table. The first pie chart displays smartphone use in the USA: iPhone 36%, Samsung 30%, LG 21%, Sony Ericson 7%, Blackberry 6%. The second pie chart shows smartphone use in European countries: Samsung 51%, iPhone 35%, Sony Ericson 8%, LG 4%, Blackberry 2%. The table outlines the proportion of spending on electronic services for the USA and European countries (EC): paid online game applications USA - 20%, EC - 25%; E-book purchase USA - 30%, EC - 15%; Netflix and similar platforms USA - 30%, EC - 25%.

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The charts demonstrate the information about distinguish between smartphone model and electronic service used in the USA and European countries.

Overall, both countries highest percentage in Samsung and Iphone models, while lowest part in the Sony Ericson and blackberry. Regarding electronic services spending more on E-book in the USA and EC spending more on Netflix and similar plateforms.

In the USA, Iphone and Samsung both models users recorded the highest percentage at 36% and 30% respectively. Lg has the third largest brand followed by 21%. Blackberry model account at 8%, whereas Sony Ericson at 5%. In European countries, Samsung model has the largest proportion of users at 51% followed by Iphone at 35%. The remaining brands had the lowest users LG and Sony Ericson at 5% and only 4% in Blackberry.

The table shows difference In spending on electronic services between the two regions. European spent 25% on paid online game applications, compare to 20% in the USA. In contrast, Americans spent more significantly on E-book purchase, at 30% , which was the double figure for Europe at 15%.

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model: 3

electronic: 3

european: 3

samsung: 3

iphone: 3

ericson: 3

spending: 3

users: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses all parts of the task and provides a clear overview of the main trends. It successfully identifies the most and least popular smartphone models and compares the spending patterns in the table. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reporting (for example, the percentages for Blackberry and Sony Ericson in the USA do not match the provided description) and some grammatical inconsistencies that occasionally affect clarity. To improve, ensure that all data points are transcribed accurately and focus on refining sentence structures to improve the flow of comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the progression is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. To improve, focus on using more effective cohesive devices and ensuring that each sentence flows naturally into the next. The overview is a bit fragmented; try to combine ideas into more complex, fluid sentences to better summarize the main trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sufficient to convey the basic meaning, but it lacks the range and precision required for higher bands. There are several instances of repetitive phrasing and incorrect word choices (e.g., 'the lowest part in', 'account at', 'double figure for'). Aim to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'show' (e.g., illustrate, depict, reveal) and more precise academic collocations when describing data (e.g., 'accounted for', 'represented', 'constituted').

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Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede the reader's understanding. There are issues with subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure (e.g., 'The charts demonstrate the information about distinguish between...'). Many sentences are simple or contain errors in complex structures. To improve, practice using a wider range of sentence types - such as relative clauses and subordinate clauses - and pay close attention to verb tenses and prepositional accuracy.

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Band 5+: THE CHARTS BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT DIFFERENT SMARTPHONE MODELS AND ELECTRONIC SERVICES USED IN THE USA AND EUROPEAN COUNTRIES. SUMMARISE THE INFORMATION BY SELECTING AND REPORTING THE MAIN FEATURES AND MAKE COMPARISONS WHERE RELEVANT, PHONE MODELS IN USE.

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