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The image presents two pie charts detailing survey results on happiness factors across age groups. For people under 30: "Achievement at work" is 31%, "Having a good lifestyle" 22%, "Traveling" 15%, "Doing hobbies" 18%, "Other factors" 14%. For people over 30: "Achievement at work" is 32%, "Family relationships" 30%, "Financial security" 20%, "Other factors" 8%, "Traveling" 10%.

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The charts illustrate the different reasons of happiness that occurs to people under and above 30.

To began with, the most important thing that cause people happy is achievement at work for both people below dan upper 30 years old that show 32% in upper 30 group and 31% in under 30 group. Moreover, doing hobbies is the second reason why many people feel happy (24% in older group and 22% in younger group).

On the other hand, there are different reasons when the above 30 group feels happy due to their financial security (about 20%) compared to the under 30 group that feels happy as their good-looking (18%). However, the younger claim they feel happy because of traveling, while the older argue that they happy when they can spend time with their family.

In addition, only 10% of other factors for the older and 14% for the younger that make them happy.

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