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Band 4+: The charts below show changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. (Pie charts)

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The image presents two pie charts comparing the energy production from different resources in a country for the years 1985 and 2003. For 1985: 52% from oil, 22% from natural gas, 13% from coal, 8% from nuclear, 4% from hydro, and 1% from other renewable sources. For 2003: 39% from oil, 23% from natural gas, 22% from coal, 8% from nuclear, 4% from hydro, and 4% from other renewable sources.

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The given pie charts illusrtraete changes in the proportion of energy produced from different resources in a country in 1985 and 2003Overall, over the period oil do not anymore occupied more than half of energy produce. Sarp increase show naural gas and coal , but they noth almost equal . In ntrast nuclear power dramatically droped .

The use of natural gas shrply increased by 10% from 13% to 23% .Similarly increase showed coal almost three times from original number and was lower than nautral gas on 1% . The other renewable energy produce gardually increased from 1% to 4 %.

the oil decrased by 13% from 52% to 39% .however ,in the oil the same way over the time the oil leading .The nuclear power show dramatically dropped from 22% to 4%.however hydro power remained unchanged with 4% and it is make hydro power and nuclear power equivalent.

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The report identifies some key trends and provides some data, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The writing contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which affect clarity. To improve, focus on accurate data representation, clearer language, and a more organized structure. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report suffers from significant issues in coherence and cohesion. The organization of information is unclear, and the transitions between sentences and ideas are weak. Paragraphing is present but doesn't effectively group related information. To improve, focus on creating a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs discussing specific trends, and a conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly,' 'in contrast,' 'however') more effectively to link ideas and ensure a smooth flow of information.

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The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the range needed to accurately and effectively describe the data. There are instances of imprecise word choice and a lack of sophistication in expressing comparisons and trends. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider variety of synonyms and more precise vocabulary related to changes and proportions (e.g., 'increased significantly,' 'decreased slightly,' 'remained stable').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in punctuation. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear, making it difficult to understand the intended meaning. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and focus on mastering basic grammar rules. Practice using a variety of sentence structures to enhance grammatical range.

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