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Band 4+: The charts below show the different number of people in Europe who were affected by four different types of noise by day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

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The image contains two bar charts detailing the number of people (in millions) affected by four types of noise pollution during the day and night in city and rural areas. In the city, the numbers affected were: Traffic (Day: 64, Night: 48), Train (Day: 10, Night: 8), Aircraft (Day: 4, Night: 1), and Industry (Day: 1, Night: 0.25). In rural areas, the corresponding figures were: Traffic (Day: 34, Night: 24), Train (Day: 8, Night: 6), Aircraft (Day: 2, Night: 1), and Industry (Day: 0, Night: 0).

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The bar chart compare the number of people who were affected by four different types of noise day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007.

Overall, the highest number of people who are affected by traffic on day times in the city. By contrast, the figure for rural areas affected in industry was the lowest in the given year.

On the one hand, the largest pollution of European people affected by traffic in daytime, there was a massive resurgence to a high point of more than 60 millions. In the year 2007, the number of people affected by trains in the daytime, which was about 10 millions and around 8 million in nighttime. However, the number of citizens affected for aircraft in day and night times, at just about 4 million and only 1 million, it less than industry.

In terms of rural areas, By polluted in daytime was around 35 million for traffic. While, the affected of people who polluted for train just under 10 million in daytime. Whereas, aircraft and industry lower then train.

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affected: 7

people: 5

million: 5

number: 4

daytime: 4

rural: 3

areas: 3

traffic: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main components of the task, but the presentation of data is inconsistent and sometimes confusing. While the key trends (traffic being the highest and industry being the lowest) are identified, the descriptions of specific figures are often grammatically fragmented, making it difficult to follow the comparisons. To improve, focus on using complete sentence structures and clearer comparative language (e.g., 'higher than', 'compared to', 'in contrast'). Ensure that every data point mentioned is linked to a clear subject and verb to avoid sentence fragments.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat difficult to follow due to fragmented sentences and improper use of cohesive devices. While you attempt to use transition signals like 'On the one hand', 'By contrast', and 'In terms of', they are often used incorrectly or attached to incomplete thoughts. To improve, ensure that every sentence has a clear subject and verb, and use linking words to connect complete ideas rather than starting sentences with 'While' or 'Whereas' without a main clause.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and often used inaccurately, which can lead to confusion. For example, phrases like 'the largest pollution of European people' or 'the affected of people who polluted' do not convey the intended meaning. You should focus on learning collocations related to data description, such as 'the number of people affected by...' or 'noise pollution caused by...'. Avoid using 'polluted' to describe people; instead, describe the noise as the pollutant and the people as the ones affected.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are significant grammatical issues throughout the report, including subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'chart compare'), sentence fragments (sentences that lack a main verb), and incorrect preposition usage. Many sentences are structurally incomplete, such as 'By polluted in daytime was around 35 million for traffic.' To improve, practice constructing simple and complex sentences correctly, ensuring that every sentence contains a subject, a verb, and a complete thought.

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