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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of electricity used by different sectors in Eastern Australia in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts show the percentage of electricity used by different sectors in eastern Australia in 2007 and 2019.

Overall, Recidental is the dominant of electricity used and it’s around 28%. And the rest of the electricity used for commercial around 23%, followed by aluminium and manufacturing at 13%, and then for other materials is 12%, for mining the electricity used around 9%, while only 1% is for agriculture and transport.

Compared to 2010, The electricity used still being dominated by recidental, and the few of them still the same as the 2007 percentage such as commercial, transport, agriculture, and mining. While the rest of the electricity used are having little difference like other materials that used 18%, followed by aluminum at 11%, and the 9% of the electricity used are mining and manufacturing.

So, overall the percentage of electricity used in 2007 and in 2010 is dominant used for recidental and after comparing of both percentage, there’s only half difference from them.

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The report identifies some main features but includes inaccuracies (e.g., '2019' instead of '2010', imprecise comparisons). The organization is basic, and the language could be more precise. To improve, focus on accurate data representation, clearer comparative language, and a more structured overall presentation.

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The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The paragraphs are not well-defined, and the flow of information is difficult to follow. Consider using more cohesive devices and structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific comparisons, and a concise conclusion. Improve the logical flow of information by grouping similar sectors together and using transition words to connect ideas.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of synonyms or more precise language to describe the data. Expand your vocabulary related to data analysis and comparison. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'electricity used,' try variations like 'electricity consumption,' 'power usage,' or 'energy expenditure.' Use more specific adjectives and adverbs to describe the changes and differences between the sectors.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. There are also issues with article usage and sentence structure. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Vary your sentence structures to improve the overall flow and readability of the report.

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