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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.

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The image contains two pie charts comparing the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in Ashby and the UK in 2008. Ashby percentages are: Unemployed (14%), Construction work (16%), Shop work (21%), Professional work (18%), Technical work (8%), Personal service (14%), Office work (9%). The UK percentages are: Unemployed (19%), Construction work (10%), Shop work (17%), Professional work (14%), Technical work (13%), Personal service (17%), Office work (10%).

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The pie charts represent the proportion of persons 23-65 engaged in distinct professions in Ashby and in the United Kingdom in the year 2008.

At a fleeting glance, it is lucid that a number of people like the personal services in Ashby whereas, most of the individuals engaged in office work in British.

To commence with, the number of persons unemployed in Ashby and England were 14% and 10% respectively. Moreover, 17% of people like technical work is almost double than the percentage in Ashby. Furthermore, ratio of professional work and construction work werw 18% and 21% which were noticed greater in comparison to UK by 6% each.

However, 17% of the people want ro get personal services as their profession. Whereas, the percentage stood at 21% in Ashby. In the contrary, people who like office work are just one percent more in comparison to the whole nation at 19%. Besides this, 14% of the persons like to do shop work compared to 13% of rhe whole population.

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The report addresses the task by comparing the percentage of people in different occupations in Ashby and the UK in 2008. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data presented.

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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of people aged 23-65 in different occupations in one UK town (Ashby) and in the UK as a whole in 2008.

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