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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of time younger and older people spend on various Internet activities in their free time(excluding email). Summarise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The image displays two pie charts comparing internet activity time percentages for two age groups. For ages 18-26: social networking 24%, accessing music/films 21%, making purchases 12%, researching health data 20%, playing games 18%, making bookings e.g. cinema/travel 5%. For ages 60-70: social networking 21%, accessing music/films 15%, making purchases 12%, researching health data 22%, playing games 5%, making bookings e.g. cinema/travel 25%.
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The charts given below demonstrates younger and older generations time spent on various online activities during their free time in percentages.

First of all looking at both age categories we can see a slight change in both age groups of researching e.g health data in the smallest deacrese possible. On the other hand making booking e.g cinema/travel has witnessed the same number of loss which makes up to 3%. Moreover accesing, music/films has experienced a similar loss in the older age category but comparatively more, playing games online although has experienced the biggest loss comparing to all, losing up to 12%.

Furthermore more making purchases online has stayed stable througout the whole age category change, comparing to all. However the biggest loss experience was in playing games. Comparing all, the major loss ever experienced was playing games online, yet the only section that stayed stable in both categories was making purchaces.

Overall, most online activities experienced a decline across both age groups, with online gaming showing the sharpest deacrease.

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Overall Band Score

5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
online: 6
experienced: 4
making: 3
playing: 3
games: 3
comparing: 3
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Task Response

4
The report attempts to address the task but contains significant issues. The description of the data is inaccurate and lacks specific details. The writing is repetitive and lacks clear organization. To improve, focus on accurately describing the data with specific figures and making direct comparisons between the age groups. Organize the information more logically and avoid repetition.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The report lacks clear organization and transitions between ideas. The flow of information is difficult to follow, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are not always logical. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the comparison of the two charts. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'However' to highlight similarities and differences. Also, ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and purpose.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and repetitive. There are instances of imprecise word choice (e.g., 'loss' used repeatedly). To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary to describe the trends and comparisons. For example, instead of 'loss,' consider using words like 'decrease,' 'reduction,' or 'decline.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to internet activities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4
The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'demonstrates younger and older generations time spent' is not grammatically correct. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures accurately. Proofread carefully to identify and correct grammatical errors. Pay attention to verb tenses, article usage, and sentence structure.

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