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Band 5+: The charts below show the proportions of the world's oil resources held in different areas, together with the proportions consumed annually in the same areas. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where re/evant.

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The image displays two charts: one showing the percentage of total world oil resources and the other depicting the percentage of total world annual oil consumption. The percentage of total world oil resources shows: Middle East 56.52%, Canada 14.84%, Central and South America 8.84%, Eastern Europe 6.15%, Africa 7.54%, United States 2.48%, Western Europe 1.52%, Australia and New Zealand 0.11%, Other 1.3%. The percentage of total world annual oil consumption shows: Middle East 6.15%, Canada 2.48%, Central and South America 6.70%, Eastern Europe 7.50%, Africa 3.93%, United States 25.48%, Western Europe 19.32%, Australia and New Zealand 1.31%, Other 2.25%.

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The bar charts illustrate the proportions of the world’s oil resources from different areas, together with how much it’s consumed yearly in the specific areas.

Overall, the percentage of total world oil resources and percentage of total world annual oil consumption had small corelation. Whilst the highest oil world resources located in middle east, asia became the highest in total oil consumption annually.

The percentage of total world oil resources is varying based on the areas. The charts also witnessed the significant different in each areas where middle east is the highest with 56.52% total, while the lowest is Australia and New Zealand is the lowest with 0.30%, it is around 56.20% differences in total.

The percentage of total world annual oil consumption have no significant differences in each areas with the highest only lead by approximately 1% from the second highest, while the lowest consumption still in Australia and New Zealand with 1.31% total.

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percentage: 4

consumption: 4

lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but lacks depth in analysis and comparison. The overview is present but could be more insightful. The description of individual regions is somewhat superficial, and the report misses opportunities to highlight key discrepancies between oil resources and consumption. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview, making more specific comparisons between regions, and ensuring accuracy in the data cited.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of ideas could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the connection between sentences and paragraphs needs strengthening. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and ensure a smoother transition between different points. For example, in the second paragraph, the shift from 'Middle East' to 'Asia' is abrupt and lacks a clear connection. The final paragraph also lacks a clear contrast with the previous one.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit vague or could be expressed more accurately. For instance, 'small corelation' could be replaced with a more specific term like 'weak correlation' or 'disparity'. Also, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to proportions, resources, and consumption to enhance the sophistication of your language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity and accuracy. Common issues include incorrect verb tense ('is varying'), subject-verb agreement ('resources located'), and article usage ('the highest oil world resources'). Additionally, sentence structure could be improved to enhance readability. For example, the sentence 'The charts also witnessed the significant different in each areas where middle east is the highest with 56.52% total, while the lowest is Australia and New Zealand is the lowest with 0.30%, it is around 56.20% differences in total' is convoluted and difficult to follow. Focus on using a variety of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy to improve the overall quality of your writing.

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