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Band 8+: The charts below show the share of the Swiss Watch Market by brand in 2020 and 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts comparing percentages for six categories over two years. In 2020, Rolex 39.5%, Omega 15.6%, Cartier 14.5%, Patek 10.3%, Longines 10.1%, AP 10%. In 2021, Rolex 46.7%, Omega 12.7%, Cartier 13.8%, Patek 8.8%, Longines 9.1%, AP 8.9%.

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The pie chart illustrates the proportions of wristwatch sales among six watch companies in Switzerland for the years 2020 and 2021.

Overall, it is evident that Rolex remains the dominant player by a wide margin in both years. While Rolex continued to strengthen its position, other companies experienced slight declines in market share.

The three largest manufacturers in 2020 were Rolex, Omega, and Cartier, holding 15.6%, 14.5%, and 10.3% of the market respectively. In 2021, Rolex increased its share to nearly half of the total market, while Omega saw a notable decrease of 2.9%. This change allowed Cartier to take the second position with a market share of 13.8%, despite experiencing a loss of 0.7%.

The remaining three companies each had around 10% of the market shares, but all faced a decline of approximately 1% in 2021. Among these companies, Patek experienced the most significant drop, while AP improved its position, rising to the fourth highest rank with a 9.1% market share in 2021.

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The report provides a clear overview and identifies the main trends, such as Rolex's dominance and the general decline of other brands. However, there are some inaccuracies in data reporting that affect the precision of the comparison. For instance, in the third paragraph, the percentages attributed to the top three brands in 2020 do not match the provided data (the report lists 10.3% for Cartier, whereas the data shows 14.5%). Additionally, some claims regarding the ranking and movement of brands (such as AP's position) are slightly inconsistent with the data provided. To improve, ensure that every figure cited is double-checked against the visual information to maintain accuracy in comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is exceptionally well-organized. The progression from the introduction to the overview and then into detailed comparisons is logical and effortless to follow. Paragraphing is used effectively to group information, and cohesive devices are used naturally to link ideas without being repetitive or intrusive.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is sophisticated and highly appropriate for an academic report. Terms such as 'dominant player', 'strengthen its position', and 'notable decrease' demonstrate a high level of lexical control. The writer successfully uses a variety of words to describe proportions and changes, avoiding unnecessary repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and various clause types, all used with full flexibility and precision. Punctuation is accurate throughout, and there are no discernible errors in grammar or syntax.

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