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Band 4+: The charts below show the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The image presents a bar chart comparing water levels in reservoirs as a percentage of their maximum capacity across 6 cities in Australia for October 2009 and October 2010; Darwin (Oct 2009: approx. 65%, Oct 2010: approx. 25%), Sydney (Oct 2009: approx. 58%, Oct 2010: approx. 70%), Melbourne (Oct 2009: approx. 35%, Oct 2010: approx. 60%), Brisbane (Oct 2009: approx. 55%, Oct 2010: approx. 50%), Perth (Oct 2009: approx. 25%, Oct 2010: approx. 50%), Canberra (Oct 2009: approx. 85%, Oct 2010: approx. 100%).

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The bar graph demonstrates portion of water level in reserviors of six different cities in Australia; Darwin, Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Perth, Canberra in 2009 and 2010.

Overall, Sydney had maximum percentage of waterlevels in 2009 while melbourne had lower water level.By 2010, water level of Canbera had significant growth suprassing sydney.In addition, other cities has made some fluctation in their portion and some remained steady.

As we can see, both Sydney and Canberra had same water level that is almost 78% in october 2009.In 2010, the water level increased steadily reaching 80%.In contrast, water level of Canberra has noticeably increased by 20% leaving sydney behind.Likewise, Darwin had 45% of water which gradually falled by 20% in 2010.

Melbourne and Perth had also shown upward trend from 20% and 40% in 2009 of october to 40% and 70% in october 2010 respectively.While, in Brisbane the percentage of water level in resevoirs remained static 58% in both year.

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water: 8

level: 6

sydney: 4

canberra: 3

october: 3

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The report addresses the task and provides some relevant information, but there are inaccuracies and omissions. The organization is present but could be improved for clarity. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, providing more specific details, and ensuring a clearer structure with more precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is disrupted by several issues. The introduction is present, but the overview is weak and lacks clear identification of overall trends. The body paragraphs contain some relevant comparisons, but the connections between sentences are not always clear, making it difficult to follow the line of reasoning. Paragraphing could be improved to group related information more effectively. To improve coherence and cohesion, focus on using clear topic sentences, logical transitions, and well-defined paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some inaccuracies and awkward phrasing. There is some repetition of words like 'water level' and 'percentage,' which could be varied for better effect. The vocabulary used is generally appropriate to the topic, but lacks precision and sophistication. To improve lexical resource, focus on expanding your vocabulary related to describing data and trends, and practice using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in article usage. Sentence structure is often simple and repetitive, limiting the overall impact of the writing. Punctuation errors are also present. To improve grammatical range and accuracy, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, practicing sentence construction, and proofreading carefully for errors.

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