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Band 7+: The charts show the main reasons for happiness among people under and over 30 years old. Write a report comparing the two age groups."

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The image displays two pie charts comparing happiness factors for people under and over 30. For people under 30: 31% report achievement at work as most important, closely followed by 22% for doing hobbies, 18% for having a good appearance, 15% for traveling, and 14% mention other factors. For people over 30: 32% cite achievement at work, 20% spending time with family, 24% doing hobbies, 20% financial security, and 4% other factors.

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The two pie charts show what makes people happy in two different age groups: those under 30 and those over 30.

Overall, both groups feel happy because of work and hobbies. However, younger people care more about looks and travel, while older people find happiness in money and family.

For both groups, work is the main reason for happiness, with 31% of younger people and 32% of older people choosing it. Hobbies are also important, making 22% of younger people and 24% of older people happy.

There are also some differences. 18% of young people feel happy when they look good, but older people do not mention this. Also, 15% of young people enjoy traveling, while this is not important for older people. Instead, 20% of older people feel happy when they have enough money, and 14% say spending time with family makes them the happiest.

In conclusion, both groups enjoy work and hobbies, but young people care more about appearance and travel, while older people value money and family time.

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people: 14

older: 7

happy: 4

groups: 3

hobbies: 3

younger: 3

while: 3

money: 3

young: 3

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8.5

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