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Band 5+: The diagram below shows a library before and after renovations.

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The image displays two floor plans of Taftsville Public Library, illustrating pre- and post-renovation layouts; initially, the 'Before' section shows an 'Adult Non-fiction' area occupying the top left, a 'Reference Area' centrally positioned, 'Desk' situated near the front door in the center, and a 'Children's Room' occupying the top right corner; the 'After' plan reallocates spaces, with 'Adult Non-fiction' remaining in the top left, an added 'Garden' in the middle alongside 'Reading Area', 'Children's Room' retaining its location on the top right, 'Magazines' newly positioned beside the 'Children's Room', 'Adult Fiction' added below 'Non-fiction', 'Desk' still near the front entrance, and 'Reference Room' relocated behind the 'Desk'.

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The diagram gives an information about the initial appearance of library and the result of modernising it.

Overall, the most noticeable change is that the garden has been added and children’s room diminished in its size. Despite, the magazines and reference room have been constructed.

To begin, the west side of the library has not changed at all. However, in the centre the desk has been moved close to the front door, so it was replaced by a reading area. Moreover, the garden has been added at the north of the building.

The east side of the library has reached three rooms, instead of big one. The children’s room has been separated into magazines and reference room. As a result, it just miniaturized, introducing new lounges.

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, describing the changes made to the library after renovations. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the east side changes is not entirely clear. To improve, ensure all key changes are accurately described and avoid generalizations. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction and overview are present, but the connection between sentences and paragraphs needs strengthening to ensure a smoother, more logical progression of ideas. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the overall readability.

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The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While the report conveys the main points, using a wider range of vocabulary related to spatial arrangements and renovations would enhance the description. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'added,' consider synonyms like 'incorporated,' 'integrated,' or 'introduced.' Also, be more specific with the location; instead of 'north of the building', use 'center' or 'middle'.

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The report contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with article usage ('an information'), verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. For instance, 'children's room diminished in its size' should be 'the size of the children's room was diminished'. Focus on using a wider range of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy to improve the overall quality of the writing.

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