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Band 6+: The diagram below shows how cheese is made. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts the cheese-making process in a step-by-step flowchart: Step 1, raw milk combined with bacteria and enzyme; Step 2, solidification into curds; Step 3, cutting into small pieces; Step 4, heating and draining; Step 5, salting; Step 6, shaping; Step 7, fermentation for 2 months; Step 8, packaging; Step 9, distribution to shops.

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The production process details making cheese.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that these entirely man-made process includes three main stages, begins with initial collecting ingredients, followed by preparation and processing, and finally delivery for retails.

The whole process starts when raw milks, which include bacteria, with enzyme are brought in jars to the factories. In the factories these commodities are solidified in the shapes of curds, and they are cut into small pieces in order to be convenient to put them into containers. These cut particles are heated and drained in special containers at the same time. after being ready, the salt is added in them, and shaped by hand. These shaped commodities are sent to fermentations in order to preserve them about two months.

Once preserved, these ready cheeses are packaged into boxes. Finally, these ready commodities are sent to shops where customers buy them for consumption.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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process: 3

commodities: 3

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Task Response

The report covers all the main stages of cheese making. Minor inaccuracies and omissions do not detract from the overall understanding of the process.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally easy to follow, but some sentences lack logical connections, affecting the overall flow. Paragraphing could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses a range of vocabulary related to cheese making, although some word choices could be more precise and natural. There is potential for more sophisticated vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the report demonstrates a range of grammatical structures, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and coherence. Improved accuracy is needed.

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