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Band 6+: The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates the sugar manufacturing process from sugar cane, starting with growing sugar cane for 12-18 months, followed by a harvesting stage which can be either manual or mechanical. Next, harvested sugar cane is crushed to extract juice. The juice undergoes purification using a limestone filter, followed by heating to evaporate water and form syrup. Then, the syrup is placed in a centrifuge to separate sugar crystals. Finally, the sugar crystals are dried and cooled, resulting in the final product: raw sugar.

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The process diagram illustrates the production of sugar from a sugar cane.

Overall, the process takes 7 steps; firstly the mature canes are harvested, after the canes are turned into juice, after several processes juice experiences cooling and drying.

Firstly, after 12 to 18 months the sugar canes become fully developed. After the canes are mature enough, the farmer or special harvesting machines harvest them and then send them and then send them to a crushing machine. The sugar canes pass through the technique and turn into sweet juice.

The juice then is purified by a limestone filter. After the limestone filtering juice is sent to an evaporator, huge metal construction that makes fluid into vapor; heat is applied to turn juice into syrup. This syrup then passes through a centrifuge. The centrifuge separates sugar crystals from syrup by moving very fast in a circular direction. Finally, sugar crystals are dried and cooled in a huge metal storage.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

sugar: 6

canes: 5

after: 5

juice: 5

syrup: 3

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Task Response

The report accurately describes the main stages of sugar production. Minor omissions and a slightly less detailed description of some steps prevent a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is generally clear, but the flow could be improved with smoother transitions between stages. Some sentences lack strong connections, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The report uses adequate vocabulary to describe the process. More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the description and achieve a higher score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the report demonstrates grammatical competence, several errors affect the overall clarity and flow. Improved grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the report.

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