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Band 6+: The diagram shows proposed changes to floor plan by k+ Architect. Write a 150-words report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

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The image shows two floor plans labeled "Before" and "After." In "Before," the layout includes a verandah leading to an entry, a living/dining area, kitchen with marked fridge (F) and pantry (P), meals area, bath, linen (L), closet (C), and two bedrooms each with robes. "After" displays an entry leading to a living area, kitchen, meals area, bath, two bedrooms labeled Bed 2 and Master Bed, with the master bedroom containing a robe, displaying a reconfiguration and possible expansion in space organization.

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K+ Architect has design a floor plan of a one-floored house. This floor plan shows how you could transform a tightly packed space in a house to be more spacious with an open-space floor plan.

This floor plan consists for an entry, living/dining area, a kitchen connected with meals area, as well as two bedrooms, and one bathroom. The exsisting floor plan is designed to have every area confined into its own area, seperated by walls.

Walls in between rooms create a very tight and claustraphobic feeling, and in inefficient to go between rooms. To enhance and utilize the overall space that this house has, the revised design introduces an open-space floorplan where the kitchen is exposed to the living area, overlooking the dining area. This new layout allows the audience to have room to breathe and it is a lot more pleasing for the eyes to see.

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house: 3

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the changes but lacks specific details about the proposed modifications. To improve, focus on describing the actual changes made in the 'After' plan compared to the 'Before' plan, such as the removal of walls, relocation of rooms, and any additions or expansions. Include specific details to enhance the description. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report provides a general overview of the changes but lacks specific details about the transformations. To improve coherence, focus on clearly outlining the key changes in a logical sequence. For example, you could start with the entry area and move through the living spaces, kitchen, and bedrooms, highlighting what has been removed, added, or reconfigured in each area. Using cohesive devices such as 'In contrast,' 'Furthermore,' and 'Similarly' can help link ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Instead of general terms like 'tightly packed space' and 'more spacious,' use more descriptive language to convey the specific changes. For example, you could mention the removal of walls, the expansion of the living area, or the addition of specific features. Incorporating synonyms and avoiding repetition can also enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'K+ Architect has design a floor plan' should be 'K+ Architect has designed a floor plan' or 'K+ Architect designed a floor plan.' Also, 'This floor plan consists for an entry' should be 'This floor plan consists of an entry.' Pay attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper preposition usage. Reviewing and editing the report carefully can help eliminate these errors.

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