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Band 5+: The diagram shows proposed changes to floor plan by k+ Architect. Write a 150-words report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

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The image shows two floor plans labeled "Before" and "After." In "Before," the layout includes a verandah leading to an entry, a living/dining area, kitchen with marked fridge (F) and pantry (P), meals area, bath, linen (L), closet (C), and two bedrooms each with robes. "After" displays an entry leading to a living area, kitchen, meals area, bath, two bedrooms labeled Bed 2 and Master Bed, with the master bedroom containing a robe, displaying a reconfiguration and possible expansion in space organization.

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The two maps demonstrate how floor plan has changed to the k+Architect.

Overall, the building is undergo significant extensive modernization, with major construction of master bed and combination of living, tables, kitching room. Despite these developments, several central features, including bath and bedroom 2 are anticipated to remain unchanged.

Before the significant alterations, the building was old-fashioned style, entry was located to the south side, adjacent to which erected bedroom and living and dinining room respectively. In the corner of north-west, both meals and kitchen have situated. A bedroom postioned next to bedroom 1 in the corner north-east.

After construction, the building experienced significant developments. There was a room, which is mixed with living, meals, kitchen in the west side of the building. An entrancy has been removed to the centre of house, directly opposite to the toilet. First bedroom has turned into master bed in the corner of south-east. Throughout these developments, the building maintained its essential amenities such as bath and bedroom 2, which remained its original location.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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bedroom: 6

building: 5

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the requirements of the task, describing the proposed changes to the floor plan. The organization is clear, with an overview followed by descriptions of the 'before' and 'after' layouts. To improve, focus on using more precise language and avoiding generalizations. For example, instead of saying "old-fashioned style," describe specific features that indicate this style. Also, ensure that spatial relationships are described accurately and clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow is somewhat disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively used to group related ideas. To improve coherence, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single aspect of the changes and use clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs. For example, use cohesive devices like 'Furthermore,' 'In contrast,' or 'Similarly' to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some word choices are not entirely accurate or natural ('kitching room,' 'entrancy'). There are also instances where more precise vocabulary could enhance the description. To improve, focus on using synonyms and varied vocabulary to describe the changes, and ensure that the vocabulary is appropriate for the context. For example, instead of 'mixed with,' consider using 'integrated' or 'combined.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('is undergo,' 'have situated'), subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors impact the clarity and accuracy of the description. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules, particularly verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Proofreading carefully for errors before submitting the report is essential.

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