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Band 5+: The diagram shows Rampart street today and the plan for changes to the street in 2035. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image displays two maps of Rampart street. 'Now' map: A two-way road for cars with a pedestrian crossing and traffic light. West side buildings (top to bottom): Food Store, Embassy, Hotel, Apartment House. East side buildings (top to bottom): Old Castle, Museum of Architecture, Apartment, House, Apartment House, Art Gallery, Apartment House, Theatre, and a Construction Site. '2035' map: A pedestrian and bicycle path with benches. West side buildings (top to bottom): Pub, Food Store, Restaurant, Embassy, Gift Shop, Exhibition Centre, Open Air Exhibition, Hotel, and Apartment House. East side buildings (top to bottom): Old Castle with an added pond, Museum of Architecture, Apartment, House, Apartment House, Art Gallery, Apartment House, Theatre, and Florist's.

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The given map illustrates Rampart street today and the plan for changes to the area in 2035. Overall, the area is going to be more developed, with noticeable changes of new facilities.

To start with, in the west, we have Food Store, Embassy and Hotel. In the south side of the area, there are construction site as well as apartment house. In the centre of the map, there is a huge road with multiple cars on. In the north, there is Old Castle. In the north eastern side, we have Museum of Architecture as well as Apartment. In the east part, we have several buildings here. For instance, House, Apartment house, Art Gallery, Apartment house and Theatre.

Turning to the map of 2035, we have some huge differences. In the west, a new pub was constructed, also a new restaurant was built. New exhibition centre and Open Air exhibition were opened in the west side. A new gift shop was also built. In the south, a new Florist’s was built. In the north, an Old Castle was replaced by a New Castle with lake next to it. In the east side, we do not see any changes, it remained unchanged. In the centre, road of traffic was demolished. A new road for a walk was built, respectively.

Surprisingly, it is clear that the area is going to be more developed over the shown period. We can see the construction of new buildings as well as the removal of several old ones.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

apartment: 4

house: 4

built: 4

changes: 3

there: 3

centre: 3

north: 3

castle: 3

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main changes between the two maps. It provides a clear overall summary and covers key developments, such as the transformation of the road and the addition of new facilities. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies: the description of the current map is somewhat disorganized and lacks a clear structure, and some details (e.g., the pedestrian crossing, traffic light, and specific locations) are not fully captured. Additionally, the report incorrectly states that the Old Castle was replaced by a new castle with a lake, whereas the map shows the Old Castle retained with a pond added. To improve, focus on a more systematic organization (e.g., grouping by area) and ensure accuracy in describing changes.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and paragraphs for each map, but the flow is disrupted by the listing of buildings without clear grouping or spatial organization. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes repetitive (e.g., 'In the west', 'In the north'). The overview is placed at the end, which is less effective; it should be in the introduction. To improve, organize the description by areas (e.g., west, east, centre) and use a range of linking words and phrases to connect ideas smoothly. Ensure the overview summarizes the main changes early in the report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There is some repetition of phrases like 'we have' and 'we see', and the language is often informal (e.g., 'a huge road with multiple cars on'). The report lacks sophisticated vocabulary for describing maps and changes (e.g., 'demolished', 'constructed', 'pedestrianized'). To improve, use a wider variety of precise terms for changes (e.g., 'replaced by', 'converted into', 'introduced') and avoid informal expressions. Also, use more specific vocabulary for locations (e.g., 'adjacent to', 'to the south of'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a range of sentence structures, but there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Examples include 'we have Food Store' (should be 'there is a Food Store'), 'a new pub was constructed, also a new restaurant was built' (comma splice), and 'a road of traffic was demolished' (unclear). Punctuation is sometimes incorrect, and there are issues with articles and plural forms. To improve, proofread for subject-verb agreement, use correct articles, and vary sentence structures. Ensure each sentence is grammatically complete and clear.

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