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Band 4+: The Diagrams below show a small local museum and its surroundings in 1957 and 2007 summarize the information by selecting main features etc.

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The image displays two diagrams comparing the layout of a museum from two different years, 1957 and 2007. In 1957, features include a garden, a national history exhibition, a local history room, a museum storeroom, an entrance hall, and direct access from the road. In 2007, the layout consists of a garden, special exhibitions, an education center, a local history room, a museum shop, a reception area, a café, an entrance from the road, and a car park.

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The given diagrams illustrate a small local museum and its surroundings 1857 and 2007.

Firstly, in 1957 upstairs was a lot of different trees and garden. In the centre of was premises. The premises had 3 rooms. The biggest was national history exhibition and next to local history room and museum store-room. Downstairs was road which leads entrance hall.

Secondly, museum in 2007 was changes. There are fewertrees, because of this garden also was smaller. The premises remainedin place, but was more spacious and changed a little. In comparison 1957 in 2007 was more rooms. There was 5 rooms. It’s museum shop, reception, cafe, local history room, special exhibitions and education centre. Downstairs road was redesigned. In addition, car park was added.

Overall, in comparison 1957 and 2007 park had a lot of changes. The garden was absolutely fewer. The premises was bigger. The road which leads to premises was removed.

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premises: 5

museum: 4

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garden: 3

rooms: 3

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The report attempts to describe the changes to the museum but struggles with organization and clarity. The description is somewhat muddled and lacks specific details. The language used is basic and contains grammatical errors, affecting the overall coherence. To improve, focus on structuring the report more clearly, providing specific details about the changes, and using more accurate and varied language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not well-connected, and the paragraphing is not effective. The use of cohesive devices is limited, making it difficult to follow the changes between the two time periods. For improvement, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address specific aspects of the changes, and a concise conclusion. Use transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and accuracy. There are instances of inappropriate word choice. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing layouts, changes, and locations. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and avoid repetition. Pay attention to the correct usage of words in context. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and sentence structure problems. These errors significantly impede understanding. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple sentences and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your accuracy improves. Proofread carefully for errors.

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