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Band 4+: The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts a progression of land use over three time periods: 1960, 1980, and 2000; in 1960, a Shopping Centre and Farmland are adjacent to a Hospital which is above a Car Park; in 1980, a Cancer Centre replaces the Shopping Centre and a Pharmacy is added next to the Hospital, with a Nursing School replacing Farmland, all maintaining the Car Park's position; by 2000, the Pharmacy has expanded in size, overshadowing the diminished Cancer Centre, with the Nursing School also larger and the Car Park unchanged.

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The diagrams illustrates the modifications that took place at queens marry hospital from 1960 to 2000

Overall, it is evident that entire area has been transformed to Full-flaged medical complex , with establishment of nursing school and cancer centre in place of shopping centre and farmland.

In the year 1960 the area was divided into four section with hospital, car parking, shopping centre and farmland however, after 20 years the shopping centre and farmland reimagined into cancer centre and nursing school. a designated pharmacy was constructed attached to the hospital. Furthermore the parking space remained same as it was back in 1960.

In 21st century little redevelopment happened with in the premises, the nursing school shifted near car parking reduce car parking space. Also, cancer centre has extended occupying nursing school area. Lastly, the main hospital building has remained unchanged over this period.

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hospital: 4

nursing: 4

school: 4

parking: 4

cancer: 3

shopping: 3

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5.5

The report provides a good overview of the changes, but misses some key details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the expansion of the pharmacy or the reduction in size of the cancer centre. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report is generally coherent, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The paragraphing could be improved.

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The report uses a good range of vocabulary, but some words are used incorrectly or inappropriately. The language is not always precise or sophisticated.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, which significantly affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of tenses and sentence structures is inconsistent.

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