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Band 5+: The diagrams show how a district park looked ten years ago and how it looks now .

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The image depicts a comparison of District Park between 2004 and 2014. In 2004: tennis courts (top left), Children's Play Area (right of tennis courts), Car Park (20 cars) (bottom left), pond (bottom center), Football ground (center), and Green Area (far right). In 2014: tennis courts (top left), Children's Play Area (right of tennis courts), Children's Soft Play Area (below play area), Football ground (center), Green Area (bottom right), boating area (bottom center), pond (bottom left), Car Park (60 cars) (left of pond), toilet (below Children's Soft Play Area), cafe (below toilet), picnic area (bottom far left), and Cycling path along the top.

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The given maps compares the district park looks in a decade.

Overall, we can see that the difference in district park in a decade between 2004 to 2014, where we can see that the area of park is more occupied in 2014 by adding new areas like picnic areas, cycling parks, toilet etc. Also, the car parking area is expanded.

Coming to the details of both maps, let’s parafase with entrance. Firstly, entrance and tennis court is unchanged but children play area is increased and children softplay zone is also added in the ground of 2014. Similarly, in the middle of the park, football ground is untouched but the car parking territory in west side of the football ground is changed as in 2004, its area fits only 20 cars but in 2014, the area is enlarged and 50 cars can be parked.

Moreover, in southeast, the large greenfield area of 2004 is replaced with cafe and greenfield sector is contracted. However, toilet is added in the map of 2014 between cafe and children softplay zone. Likewise, boting area is added on pond and picnic location is added in the map of 2014. Finally, cycling track is constructed in the boundry of park in the new map.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

added: 4

children: 3

ground: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main changes between the two maps. It provides a clear overview and organizes the information logically. However, there are some minor inaccuracies (e.g., car park capacity stated as 50 instead of 60) and a few omissions (e.g., the exact location of the cycling path and the relocation of the pond). The language is generally clear, but there are some grammatical and lexical errors (e.g., 'parafase', 'boting', 'boundry') that slightly affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data and use more precise vocabulary and grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The use of cohesive devices is basic and occasionally inaccurate (e.g., 'let's parafase with entrance' is confusing). Paragraphing is attempted but could be more skillfully managed to separate different areas of the park more clearly. To improve, use clearer topic sentences and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of changes, with smooth transitions between them.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'expanded', 'enlarged', 'replaced', and 'constructed'. However, there are inaccuracies and limited range (e.g., 'parafase' instead of 'paraphrase', 'boting' instead of 'boating', 'boundry' instead of 'boundary'). The report would benefit from a wider range of precise vocabulary to describe changes (e.g., 'relocated', 'converted', 'extended') and more natural collocations. Avoid informal or unclear expressions like 'let's parafase with entrance'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are numerous grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as subject-verb agreement ('maps compares'), tense inconsistencies, and incorrect word forms (e.g., 'parafase', 'boting'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or awkwardly phrased. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures with greater accuracy, and proofread for common errors like pluralization and verb tense consistency.

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