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Band 5+: The diagrams show the sales of cars of 3 different brands between 2015 – 2019.

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The image contains two separate graphs, the top graph labeled "The Sales of Cars from 2015-2019" displays three car brands, X-brand, Y-brand, and Z-brand, with sales data in millions for each year. X-brand shows decreasing sales from 3 million in 2015 to 1 million in 2019, Y-brand shows an increase from 1 million in 2015 to 2 million in 2018 then a drop to 1.5 million in 2019, and Z-brand shows an increase from 1 million in 2015 to just over 2 million in 2017, followed by a decrease to 2 million in 2018 and a sharp drop to 1 million in 2019. The bottom graph, "Car Sales by Types," is a pie chart with five car types, each with a percentage: MPV 35%, Sportscar 10%, SUV 25%, Sedan 25%, and Hatchback City Car 5%.

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The line chart comares the number of cars brand sold and the pir chart compares the proportion of car sold between 2015 and 2019.

It is clear that the highet number of selling brand car was was xbrand.It is noticable that the proportion of selling mvp car was also highest over the period of 5 years.

Looking at the line chat,the number of selling xbrand car was 1 million in 2015, which increased to almost 3 million in 2019, a rise of almost 2 million cars.Howerver,there was an oncrease of alomst 0.3 million in the number of selling Ybrand car from 2 million in 2015 to 1.7 million in 2019.In 2015,the number of Zbrand car sell was over 3 million, while this figure decreased to 2 million in 2015 and 2019.

According to the pie chart, the proportion of suv car selling was 25%, while the proportion rate of mvp was 35% during the period of 2015 and 2019.The proportion of sportscar seeling was just 3 % which was lower than the other types pf car from 2015 to 2019.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 8

number: 5

proportion: 5

selling: 5

chart: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task but contains inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the line graph contains several errors in the data reported. The pie chart description also contains inaccurate data. The writing also contains grammatical errors. To improve, ensure accurate data reporting and proofread for grammatical errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization needs improvement. Grouping information by chart type is a good start, but the details within each paragraph lack a clear flow. For instance, the line chart analysis jumps between brands without a logical sequence. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each brand or grouping them based on sales trends (increase/decrease). Also, the pie chart analysis could benefit from a clearer comparison of proportions. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'similarly', 'in contrast', 'overall') to link ideas and sentences more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is somewhat limited and repetitive ('selling', 'number'). Try to incorporate a wider range of synonyms to describe sales figures (e.g., 'volume', 'units sold', 'popularity'). Also, be more precise with your language. For example, instead of 'highet number of selling brand car was was xbrand', try 'X-brand recorded the highest sales figures'. Expanding your vocabulary will enhance the clarity and sophistication of your writing. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and spelling mistakes. Sentence structure is also often awkward and unclear. For example, 'the number of cars brand sold' is grammatically incorrect. Focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Practice constructing a variety of sentence types to improve your grammatical range.

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