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Band 5+: The figure shows the result of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believe certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The image displays data from a survey of 1000 adolescents in five countries: USA, UK, Mexico, Japan, and Egypt, detailing the ages they believe certain rights and responsibilities should be granted. In the USA, Marriage: 18, Voting: 18, Criminal Responsibility: 12. In the UK, Marriage: 16, Voting: 18, Criminal Responsibility: 10. In Mexico, Marriage: 16, Voting: 18, Criminal Responsibility: 15. In Japan, Marriage: 16, Voting: 20, Criminal Responsibility: 14. In Egypt, Marriage: 18, Voting: 18, Criminal Responsibility: 14.

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The bar chart provides information about the outcome of a research, participated by a thousand adolescents in five distinct countries. About when certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people, categorizing it by marriage, voting, and criminal responsibilities.

Overall, it can be told by looking at the graph that Japanese have higher toleration in all categories compared to other nations. Especially Mexican people have lower toleration at all.

People are married at least on the age of 16 in Mexico and Egypt whereas this figure is higher in the USA and the UK, 18, 21, respectively. And it hits its peak with almost 22 in Japan.

On the other hand, while British and Mexicans start voting at around 16, Americans and Egyptians begin voting at 18, and in Japan, it is almost 20. Although Japanese are responsible for their crime records as of 18, the time for being responsible for it has lowest rates in general between 12 and 14. Furthermore, Americans are the most untolerable.

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Task Response

The report identifies some overall trends but contains inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. The writing is somewhat unclear and contains some language errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, using precise language, and ensuring grammatical correctness.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. The introduction is adequate, but the overall summary lacks clear transitions between ideas. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and paragraphing could be improved to enhance clarity. For example, the connections between sentences within paragraphs are not always explicit, making it harder for the reader to follow the argument. Consider using more varied cohesive devices and ensuring each paragraph focuses on a single, well-defined aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary, but there are instances where the word choice is not precise or natural. For example, 'higher toleration' and 'lower toleration' are not the most accurate ways to describe the data. While the vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, there is room for improvement in using more sophisticated and precise language. Focus on expanding your vocabulary related to comparisons and trends, and consider using a thesaurus to find more appropriate synonyms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect tense usage, and awkward phrasing are present throughout the report. While the overall meaning is generally clear, these errors detract from the report's credibility. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Pay close attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions.

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