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Band 5+: The following bar chart shows the share in modes of transport in 2014 of three cities: New York, Sydney and Hong Kong. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows transport mode percentages for New York, Sydney, Hong Kong: Private transport at 45% for New York, 70% for Sydney, 15% for Hong Kong; Walk at 10% for New York, 20% for Sydney, 35% for Hong Kong; Rail at 25% for New York, 10% for Sydney, 35% for Hong Kong; Bus at 15% for New York, 5% for Sydney, 10% for Hong Kong; Other at 5% for New York, 0% for Sydney, 5% for Hong Kong.

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The bar charts illustrate percentage of different kinds of transport in three major cities:New York, Sydney and Hong Kong in 2014.

Overall, traveling by private transport or walking were quite popular options in New York and Sydney.However, Bus was the most common way to get a destination.

Firstly, it can be seen that private transport was significantly popular way in Sydney, which accounted for nearly 70 percent. This way was also common among people who lived in New York, since the percentage was occupied by over 30 percent.

When it comes to New York , it is obvious that almost 40 percent of individuals commuted on foot. In addition, walking was ranked the second highest of all transportation in Sydney, which was at just under 20 percent.

On the other hand, in terms of Hong Kong, majority of people were used public transportation. Especially half numbers of individuals were used bus. Additionally, train was the second common way, which was at 30 percent .

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