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Band 4+: The following bar chart shows the share in modes of transport in 2014 of three cities: New York, Sydney and Hong Kong. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows transport mode percentages for New York, Sydney, Hong Kong: Private transport at 45% for New York, 70% for Sydney, 15% for Hong Kong; Walk at 10% for New York, 20% for Sydney, 35% for Hong Kong; Rail at 25% for New York, 10% for Sydney, 35% for Hong Kong; Bus at 15% for New York, 5% for Sydney, 10% for Hong Kong; Other at 5% for New York, 0% for Sydney, 5% for Hong Kong.

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The following bar chart shows that the shares in mode of transportation in 2014 between three cities, New York, Sydney and Hong Kong.

Overall, the chart illustrate that the mode of transport sysytem in 2014 in three cities like New York are private transport system are about 32% and rail transport are 10% and the other transport are about 8% and in Sydney the private transportation are 68%and rail are about 5% and other are also 5% while in Hong Kong private transport are about 10% and rail are 30% while the other are approximately 2%.

In the 2014 the transport ratio in New York in private transport are about 32% which is normal in the city and the people who walk on foot that rato are about 38% which are high in New York and the rail transport are about 10% and the bus transport are 9% while the other transport are about 5% which are low and in Sydney, the ratio of private transport are 68% which are high and walk ratio are approximately 18% which are normal and the raio of train are 5% and the bus transport ratio are also 5% and the other are 3% which are very low.

The ratio of transportation in Hong Kong, in private are about 10% which are consider normal while theratio of walk are about 5% ad the rail are about 30% which are high and the ratio of bus are about 52% which are the highest ratio of transport in Hong Kong while the other are about 2% which are cosider nigligible.

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