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Band 5+: The following chart illustrates the information about players of electronic games in South Korea in 2003.

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The image contains two pie charts; the first chart details the age distribution of electronic game players in South Korea in 2003, with 38% under 18, 23% over 36, and 39% between 18 to 35; the second chart depicts the gender distribution with 72% male and 28% female.

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The pie chart shows data of players participating in electonic games in south korea in 2023.Despite that,we have another graph showing number of women and men participating in percentage form.

overview,majority people who participated were between the age of 18 to 35.The least was above the age of 36.

The largest number participating is clearly 39 percent which is the age of 18 to 35.While the largest over the age of 36 with 23 percent.Medium was 38 percent slightly close to the leading was children and teenagers below the age of 18

Is is also clearly seen that the male gender was highly interested in electronic games compared to women in the other chart by 72 percent while women on the other side was 28 percent which is far different from men.

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