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Band 7+: The following plans show recent archaeological findings at a historic site in the year 2004 and 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant,

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The image presents two diagrams; the first, titled "Historic site in 2004", depicts 3 trees, a mountain range, 2 structures labeled "Ancient house", 1 structure labeled "Ancient temple", and a body of water labeled "Sea"; the second diagram, titled "Historic site in 2014", depicts 1 structure labeled "Ancient stadium", 2 trees, 1 facility labeled "Ancient toilet", 8 structures labeled "Ancient house", 1 structure labeled "Ancient palace", 1 structure labeled "Ancient temple", and the sea.

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The map illustrates an archaeological discovey at a historic site in the year 2004 and 2014

Overall, it is clear that archaeologists have found an ancient palace as well as an ancient stadium along with several other new ancient houses. Looking at the details in the year 2014, it shows that archaeologists have found seven more houses that are similar except for one house that is unusually big compared to the others. There has also been a new finding of a ancient stadium most probably due to the excavation of a tree on comparison with the historic site in 2004.

Compared to 2004, it shows that an ancient palace has been found on the left side of the ancient temple. Looking straight above the ancient palace, there are toilets that have been discovered by the archaeologists. Within the 10 year time period, archaeologists have found an ancient palace, a stadium, and an ancient toilet for both genders.

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ancient: 9

archaeologists: 4

found: 4

palace: 4

stadium: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main changes between 2004 and 2014, such as the discovery of the ancient palace, stadium, and additional houses. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the number of new houses is stated as seven, but the visual description indicates eight structures labeled 'Ancient house' in 2014 (compared to two in 2004, so six new ones). Also, the mention of 'ancient toilet for both genders' is not supported by the visual description. The report could be improved by more precise data and clearer comparisons. Ensure all key features are accurately reported and avoid unsupported details.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall statement and a logical progression from general to specific details. However, the flow could be improved by more effective use of cohesive devices and clearer paragraphing. For instance, the second paragraph mixes overall findings with specific details, and the third paragraph introduces new information without a clear link to the previous one. Consider structuring the report into distinct paragraphs for the overview and detailed comparisons, and use linking words such as 'in contrast', 'similarly', or 'in addition' to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the task, with terms like 'archaeological discovery', 'excavation', and 'ancient palace' showing good range. However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitions, such as 'ancient' used multiple times and 'most probably due to' which is informal. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'uncovered', 'revealed', or 'unearthed', and avoid informal phrases. Also, ensure correct word forms, e.g., 'discovery' instead of 'discovey'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and comparisons. However, there are minor errors that affect clarity, such as 'a ancient' (should be 'an ancient'), and some awkward phrasing like 'for both genders' which is unclear. Punctuation is mostly correct, but the first sentence lacks a period. To improve, proofread for article usage and ensure sentences are complete. Also, vary sentence structures to show flexibility, and use more precise language to avoid ambiguity.

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