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Band 5+: The given charts describe responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about a university library.

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The image shows four pie charts. For "Range of books," postgraduate ratings: very bad 12%, satisfactory 33%, very good 55%; undergraduate ratings: very bad 22%, satisfactory 50%, very good 28%. For "Non printed material," postgraduate ratings: very bad 23%, satisfactory 48%, very good 27%; undergraduate ratings: very bad 23%, satisfactory 25%, very good 52%.

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The four pie charts compare the responses of undergraduate and postgraduate students to a questionnaire about the range of books and non printed material of a university library.

A clear divergence in satisfaction patterns is observable: majority of the students were satisfied or vary happy with the range of books and non printing materials of the library.

Firstly, 55% postgraduate went for range of books was very good, whereas almost a third said that it was satisfactory. In contrast, half of the undergraduate students were just satisfied with the collections of books and over a quarter considered very good. Moreover, regarding the ”very bad” section the rates of postgraduate was 12% and for undergraduate it was dabbled.

Moving to the non printed material, most of the students who are doing bachelor’s is fond of non printed material and they rate vary good ( 52% ). 48% Bachelor’s students fond of non printed and voted satisfied, though 25% undergraduate vote for it. In both post and under graduate almost 25% consist of very bad.

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students: 5

undergraduate: 4

books: 4

printed: 4

postgraduate: 3

range: 3

material: 3

satisfied: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of the data and makes some comparisons between undergraduate and postgraduate responses. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions, such as not fully representing all the data points for 'Non printed material'. To improve, ensure all key data points are mentioned and that the language used is precise and accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction provides a general overview, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. The organization of information within paragraphs is not always logical, making it harder for the reader to follow the comparisons. For example, the shift from discussing postgraduate responses to undergraduate responses in the first body paragraph could be smoother. Consider using more explicit linking words and phrases to connect ideas and improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a reasonable range of vocabulary, but there are instances where the word choice is not precise or natural (e.g., "dabbled," "fond of"). While the vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, expanding the range and using more sophisticated synonyms would enhance the report. Pay attention to using vocabulary that accurately reflects the data and avoids ambiguity.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. These include incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, "majority of the students were satisfied or vary happy" contains both a typo and an awkward construction. Similarly, "25% undergraduate vote for it" has subject-verb agreement issues. While the overall meaning is usually clear, these errors detract from the report's credibility. Focus on proofreading carefully to identify and correct grammatical mistakes.

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