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Band 5+: The given charts illustrates the proportions of reasons individuals visited the library within 2022, divided by gender.

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The image displays two pie charts on the percentage of reasons people go to the library in 2022, divided by gender. For Males, the reasons are: have a group study (24%), borrow a book (22%), attend book discussion (14%), access computer library (12%), and look for reference (28%). For Females, the reasons are: have a group study (40%), borrow a book (16%), attend book discussion (23%), access computer library (13%), and look for reference (8%).

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The given charts illustrates the proportions of reasons individuals visited the library within 2022, divided by gender.

Overall, it is clear that the percentage of reasons people who went to the library were differently. Looking for reference was more populler for male than for female. Female preferred having a group study in library than other reasons.

Based on the graph, having a group study for male in library was higher than that for male. the former at 40%, while the latter at 24%. The reason of male went to library more for looking references,at 28%, female lesser stood at 8%. going to library for borrow a book, male stood at 22% and female at 16%, it was clear that male had the percentage higher.

In terms of female went to library for attending book discussion, it was preferred than that male, at 23% and 14% respectively. The proportion of acces computer in the library, female and male had a difference data present went to the library just only 1%.

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the information presented in the pie charts. The overall trends and key differences between males and females are identified. However, there are some areas for improvement. The report could benefit from more precise language and a stronger focus on data accuracy. For example, instead of saying "having a group study for male in library was higher than that for male," clarify that you are comparing males and females. Also, ensure that all data points mentioned are accurate and directly supported by the charts. Additionally, the organization could be improved by grouping similar reasons together or providing a more structured comparison.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some organization, but the flow of information is not always smooth. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be improved to enhance coherence. Paragraphing is present but could be used more effectively to group related information. For example, the comparison of each reason could be grouped together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks precision. There is an attempt to use comparative language, but it is not always accurate or effective. Expanding the range of vocabulary and using more precise language would improve the report. For example, instead of 'more populler', use 'more popular'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence structure. For example, 'The given charts illustrates' should be 'The given charts illustrate'.

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