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Band 5+: The given map details Porth Harbor in the past and alterations made in the present day

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The image features two maps of Porth Harbour, first from 2000 and second from today. In 2000, the layout includes a car park, showers & toilets, a marina for private yachts, fishing boats area, a lifeboat station, passenger ferries, a public beach, and a disused castle. Today, the same area still contains the car park, showers & toilets, marina, and fishing boats, but now includes cafés & shops near the marina. The lifeboat station is unchanged, while a private beach for hotel guests has been created, and a hotel is present where the disused castle was located.

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The maps illustrate the development of the Porth Harbour from 2000 to the present.

Overall, the city witnessed massive infrastructural changes over the years, modernize the city by improving its facilities. Meanwhile, it can constructed new cafés & shops and replace public beach to privet.

In 2000, the Porth Harbour has been undergone in significant changes. The public beach and disused castle have located in the southeast corner of the city, while shower and car park was located in the northwest corner of the city. By contrast, in the south side of the city there was another car park next to the fishing boats.

Currently, the castle and public beach have replaced by a large hotel and privet beach. Furthermore, there was a new café & shops has built next to the private yachts’ marina, which was recently replaced with fish boats. Moreover, a new shower and toilets facilities was constructed in front of car park. However, lifeboat and duck have remained unchanged.

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public: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and covers the main changes, but there are some inaccuracies and unclear expressions. For example, 'replace public beach to privet' should be 'replace the public beach with a private one', and 'duck' is likely a typo for 'dock'. The description of the car park location is inconsistent, and the statement about the marina being replaced with fishing boats is incorrect. To improve, ensure accurate data presentation, use clearer language, and avoid minor errors that detract from the overall clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs, but the flow is disrupted by frequent grammatical errors and unclear referencing. The overview is somewhat vague and contains inaccuracies in phrasing. Paragraphing is attempted but not consistently effective, and some sentences are hard to follow. To improve, focus on creating clearer topic sentences and ensuring each paragraph has a single, well-developed idea. Use cohesive devices more accurately to link ideas within and between sentences.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, including words like 'illustrate', 'development', 'infrastructural', and 'replaced'. However, there are several lexical errors and awkward choices, such as 'modernize the city' (should be 'modernizing the city'), 'privet' (should be 'private'), and 'duck' (likely meant 'dock'). The range is limited and not always precise. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct word forms and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and accuracy. Examples include 'it can constructed' (incorrect passive), 'has been undergone' (incorrect tense), 'have located' (should be 'were located'), 'there was a new café & shops has built' (mixed tense and structure), and 'was constructed in front of car park' (missing article). The range of structures is limited, and errors are frequent. To improve, focus on using a wider range of sentence structures with greater accuracy, and pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and article usage.

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