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Band 4+: The grapgh below shows China's population by age group starting in 1960 and including forecast to 2050.

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The image shows a graph illustrating changes in the distribution of China's population by age group, ranging from 1960 to a projected 2050. The 0-14 age group demonstrates a decline from 40% to roughly 15%, the 15-64 group increases from 55% to almost 70% by 2010, then decreases to just above 50%, and the 65+ group gradually grows from under 5% to nearly 30% by 2050.

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The graph beneath illlustrates Chinese population by their age 0-65+ years old between 1960 and 2050.Overall,as shown in graph population of people who are in 15-65 years showed the highest point while people under 15 years old decreased dramaticly and population of 65+ people decreased slightly.

According to the graph population of people 15-65+ years old the peakest one.It started around 40% then rose significantly to 70% over the 60 year period.Although,it started to drop slighitly by scintists predictions about future.Untill the 2050 it declined by 55%.Whereas,population of individuals under 15 year go down sharply.In 1960 populaton was 45%,it decreased steeply untill 2050 by hitting 17,5%.

It is noticable that population of people older 65 years hit the lowest point however increased.In 1960 it almost hit the 10% and showed a period of stability between 1960 and 2010.In addition from 2020 population sterted grew untill 2050 by 25% and hit second place.

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The report addresses the task, but there are some inaccuracies and a lack of clarity. The description of trends is somewhat general and could benefit from more specific data points and comparisons. The language used contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing more precise data, using a wider range of vocabulary, and ensuring grammatical accuracy.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The overview is present but lacks precision. The body paragraphs are not well-structured, and the transitions between sentences and ideas are weak, making it difficult to follow the information. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and improve the overall structure.

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The vocabulary is limited and sometimes inaccurate ('peakest,' 'slighitly,' 'scintists'). There is a lack of precision in describing trends and quantities. Expand your vocabulary related to describing graphs and trends (e.g., 'increased steadily,' 'fluctuated,' 'remained stable'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word usage ('go down sharply,' 'sterted grew'). Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar and sentence construction to enhance clarity.

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