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Band 4+: The graph below describes the use of fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and internet between 1994 and 2005 in China. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a graph indicating the number of people in millions using fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and the Internet from 1994 to 2005; fixed telephone lines start around 50 million in 1994, reaching approximately 300 million by 2005, mobile phone usage begins near zero, surpassing fixed lines around 1998, reaching about 450 million by 2005, while Internet usage, starting just above zero, steadily climbs to nearly 200 million by 2005.

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the line chart shows the use of fixed telephone lines,mobile phones, and internet between 1994 and 2005 in china

overall, while fixed telephone line and mobile phone -significantly increased the opposite was true internet. moreover, fixed telephone line and mobile phone ranked the highest rate as well as saw a considerable disparity, internet was lowest from 1994 to 2005

looking in the graph, in first three years, fixed telephone line had 20 million users while mobile phone and internet not yet used. then, in 1997 to 2000, fixed telephone line and mobile phone saw a sharp increase from 50 million people in 1997 to 155 and 200 million people in 2000. the last 5 years, that number is still increasing significantly and reach the highest point at 450 and 350 million people in 2005.

in first 5 years, internet grew minimally from 0 million people to 110 millions people in 1996 to 2000, last 5 years, that number slightly increased from 160 millions people to 190 millions people in 2001 to 2005 and reached a peak at 190 millions people

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Vocabulary Repetition:

people: 8

fixed: 5

telephone: 5

internet: 5

million: 5

mobile: 4

phone: 4

years: 4

millions: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and attempts to provide data for all three categories. However, there are significant inaccuracies in the data reporting that affect the clarity of the summary. For example, the overview states that internet usage decreased ('the opposite was true internet'), whereas the data shows it actually increased. Additionally, some comparisons are confusingly phrased. To improve, ensure that the direction of trends (increase vs. decrease) is accurately identified and that data points are clearly linked to the correct categories. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure to ensure the comparisons between the three technologies are logical and easy to follow.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear organizational structure. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices like 'overall' and 'moreover', they are often used incorrectly or in ways that do not logically connect the ideas. The paragraphing is present but the internal flow of sentences is disjointed. To improve, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic and use transition words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Subsequently', 'Regarding') to guide the reader through the comparisons more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and repetitive. There are several instances of awkward phrasing, such as 'ranked the highest rate' and 'not yet used', which do not accurately convey the intended meaning in an academic context. Additionally, there are errors in word formation (e.g., '110 millions people' instead of '110 million people'). Aim to use a wider variety of synonyms for 'increase' (e.g., 'surged', 'climbed', 'rose steadily') and ensure that nouns and adjectives are used with precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede the reader's ability to follow the report. There are issues with sentence structure (run-on sentences), subject-verb agreement, and tense consistency. For example, 'the opposite was true internet' is grammatically incomplete. Punctuation is also inconsistent, particularly with spacing after commas. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures (simple, compound, and complex) and ensure that every sentence has a clear subject and predicate.

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