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Band 7+: The graph below describes the use of fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and internet between 1994 and 2005 in China. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a graph indicating the number of people in millions using fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and the Internet from 1994 to 2005; fixed telephone lines start around 50 million in 1994, reaching approximately 300 million by 2005, mobile phone usage begins near zero, surpassing fixed lines around 1998, reaching about 450 million by 2005, while Internet usage, starting just above zero, steadily climbs to nearly 200 million by 2005.

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The line graph provides data on the use of fixed telephone lines, mobile phones, and the internet in China over an 11-year period from 1994 to 2005, with figures measured in million people.

Overall, the use of all the sources exhibited upward trends throughout the timeframe. Notably, the share of the mobile phones soared to the highest level compared to the fixed telephones and the internet over the period shown.

In 1994, the fixed telephone was used by approximately 30 million people, while there were not any users of the mobile phones and the internet. By 1996, both the fixed telephone and the mobile phone users had demonstrated notable increases, the former growing to just under 100 million people and the latter to 50 million people. In contrast, that of the internet remained stable in 1996.

By 2005, the use of mobile telephone had reached a peak of 450 million people. Similarly, the figures for the fixed telephone and the internet experienced considerable rises to 350 and 200 million people, respectively over the period.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

million: 6

fixed: 5

telephone: 5

mobile: 5

internet: 5

people: 5

phones: 3

period: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main trends and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., initial fixed telephone users, fixed telephone users in 2005). To improve, ensure greater accuracy in data reporting and include more specific details to support the overall trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. The information is presented logically, and the progression of ideas is easy to follow. However, the use of cohesive devices could be improved to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs. For example, transitions could be more varied and sophisticated to avoid repetition and create a smoother reading experience. Also, paragraphing is generally effective, but consider whether the information in the final paragraph could be integrated more effectively with the preceding paragraphs or further developed to provide a more comprehensive summary.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, appropriate for the task. Terms like 'exhibited upward trends,' 'soared,' 'notable increases,' and 'considerable rises' are used effectively to describe the data. However, there is room for improvement in using more precise and varied vocabulary to describe trends and comparisons. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'increases,' consider synonyms like 'growth,' 'expansion,' or 'escalation' to add nuance and sophistication to the language. Also, explore opportunities to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to technology and communication to enhance the report's lexical richness. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a strong command of grammar with a variety of sentence structures used effectively. There are only a few minor errors, indicating a high level of accuracy. To further enhance the grammatical range, consider incorporating more complex sentence structures, such as using a wider array of subordinate clauses or varied sentence beginnings. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage, especially when describing past trends. Proofreading carefully for minor errors can help elevate the report to an even higher level of grammatical accuracy.

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