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Band 4+: The graph below gives information about the total oil use of 4 major consumers from 2009 to 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image is a line graph titled "Oil use of major consumers" with the x-axis representing years (2009, 2015, 2025, 2030) and the y-axis representing millions of barrels per day, ranging from 0 to 10 in increments of 2. Four lines depict the oil use of different consumers: US (dotted line), China (solid line with triangles), Western Europe and Japan (solid line), Middle East (dashed line with circles). In 2009, US used around 9 million barrels per day, Western Europe and Japan about 5, China approximately 3.5, and Middle East nearly 2. By 2015, US declined to around 8, Western Europe and Japan to 4, Middle East increased to 3, and China rose to about 6. The projected use in 2025 shows US at 6, Western Europe and Japan at 3, China at 8, and Middle East at 4. By 2030, US is expected to decrease to 5.5, Western Europe and Japan to 2.5, China to maintain at 8, and Middle East to increase to 5.

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The line graph shows the information about using the oil in 4 mainly customers beetwen 2009and 2030.

Overall, it can be seen that the U. S always was the biggest one than the other three consumers another important trend in the data is that Middle East was the lowest however in the end they was already in third place.

The U.S was and stayed the most higher a gradual decrease followed by a sudden fall in 2015 by 2030 at 6 million meanwile Middle East In can be observed that there has been a slighty rose in 2025 but by the2030 they will approximetly 5million.

China maintained the same level with the Middle East similary at the 2030 they stopped equal level.However, by the 2025 was moderately rose and peaked at around 2 million.In the westeren Europe and Japan stedily dipped to the finish and by the 2030 they will be the smaller one about 2 million.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Task Response

The report addresses the task, but there are some issues with organization, accuracy, and language. The overview is present but could be more comprehensive. The body paragraphs contain some inaccuracies and lack specific data to support the trends described. Grammatical errors and imprecise language affect clarity. To improve, focus on providing more specific data points, ensuring accuracy, and refining grammar and vocabulary.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is weak, and transitions between sentences and ideas are often abrupt. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect or trend, and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices such as transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of imprecise word choice and a lack of variety in expressing trends and comparisons. To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., increase, decrease, fluctuate, peak, plateau) and comparisons (e.g., higher, lower, similar, different). Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your vocabulary. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in article usage. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. To improve grammatical accuracy, review basic grammar rules and practice writing simple and complex sentences correctly. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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