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Band 4+: The graph below shows information about the total oil consumption of four major consumers from 2009 to 2030.

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The image depicts a line graph indicating oil consumption from 2009 to 2030 for the USA, China, Middle East, and Western Europe & Japan. In 2009, the USA consumed approximately 9.5, China 3, Middle East 2, Western Europe & Japan about 2. In 2015, the USA consumed about 10, China roughly 4, Middle East around 3, and Western Europe & Japan slightly below 2. By 2025, the USA's consumption was about 8, China's was 5, the Middle East's was close to 3, and Western Europe & Japan's was near 2. Projections for 2030 indicate the USA at around 7, China at nearly 6, Middle East approximately 3, and Western Europe & Japan near 2.

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The line graph provides the data on the percentage of the oil consumption for four major suppliers from 2009 to 2030.

Overall, a glance at the graph reveals that, USA utilized the most significant oil share over the period. In adition, other three consumers did not purchase oil for their life.

According to the chart, USA made up the largest share for oil consumption (10%). However, it illustrates flactuations and it remained stable at 8% between 2025 and 2030. Furthermore, the consumption of oil for China increased untill 2025 and it went down in the next years around 4%.

Next, in some countries, oil did not use much than others. One of them is Middle East. Middle East faced only tiny rises untill 2030 and its highest figure was 3%. Additionally, the percentage of oil among Western Europe and Japan took up only decrease over the period between 4 and 2%

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains several significant issues that hinder clarity and accuracy. There is a fundamental misunderstanding of the data; the report describes the figures as 'percentages' and 'shares,' whereas the task and visual description refer to total oil consumption (units are not specified as percentages). Additionally, some claims are illogical, such as stating that other consumers 'did not purchase oil for their life.' To improve, ensure you accurately interpret the units of measurement and focus on describing the trends (increases, decreases, and stability) without making unsupported or nonsensical claims about the subjects' behavior.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of the report is somewhat logical, but the progression of ideas is hindered by poor cohesive devices and confusing phrasing. Some sentences do not follow logically from the previous ones. To improve, focus on using transition words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Similarly', 'Regarding') more effectively to link your observations. Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central topic that relates back to the overall trends.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and often inaccurate in context. For example, using 'suppliers' instead of 'consumers' or 'purchase oil for their life' changes the fundamental meaning of the task. There are also several spelling errors (e.g., 'adition', 'flactuations', 'untill'). Aim to use more precise academic vocabulary related to trends, such as 'fluctuated', 'remained steady', 'surpassed', or 'declined', and ensure you are using the correct terminology provided in the prompt. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors that occasionally impede communication. Issues include subject-verb agreement, incorrect comparative structures (e.g., 'did not use much than others'), and awkward sentence constructions. You should practice using a wider variety of complex sentence structures and focus on the accuracy of comparative and superlative forms to better describe the relationships between the data points.

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