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Band 4+: The graph below shows the average length of stay last year (in days) for serious injuries for different age groups in private and public hospitals in Queensland in Australia

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The image shows a line graph titled "Last Year's Average Length of Stay at Private and Public Hospitals for Serious Injuries – Queensland, Australia" with two lines representing 'PUBLIC' and 'PRIVATE' hospitals. The X-axis lists age groups: 00-05, 06-10, 11-15, 20-25, 30-35, 40-45, 50-55, 60-65, 70-74, 75-80, 85+; with corresponding years below each group: 04, 09, 14, 19, 24, 29, 34, 39, 44, 49, 54, 59, 64, 69, 74, 79, 84. The Y-axis measures the average length of stay (days), ranging from 0 to 60 in increments of 10. For Public hospitals, the data points for age groups are as follows: 00-05: 35 days, 06-10: 25, 11-15: 25, 20-25: 15, 30-35: 35, 40-45: 52, 50-55: 40, 60-65: 42, 70-74: 20, 75-80: 18, 85+: 18. For Private hospitals, the data points are: 00-05: 20 days, 06-10: 16, 11-15: 20, 20-25: 14, 30-35: 15, 40-45: 20, 50-55: 20, 60-65: 25, 70-74: 18, 75-80: 14, 85+: 14. There are no data points for the 16-19 and 26-29 age groups.

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The graph illustrates the average statistics last year for serious traumas for different age group in private and public hospitals in Queensland, Australia.

Overall, it can be seen that public hospitals stays higher than private hospitals statistics.

The individuals in a public hospitals begin with a zero to four years. They stay at hospital too short time. Teenagers years between five and nineteen stays at public hospital almost for a month. Adults years between twenty and fourth nine has the highest level of length of stay among them. Old people years between fifty and eighty five or more stays at public hospital for a month or little bit lower.

The private hospital level is lower and shorter than public. Age limit starts with 15 and 20, that persons stay for 10 days. The highest statistics has adults, 25-29 years, that people stays for a month. After this level, statistics quite stable.

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